Great fic overall, but the last line really got me laughing.

Could you please continue with this

nice

personal pet peeve: use of real world company name, logo ext.

Victoria's Secret suggested replacement with something else like Veronica's Mystery (I know not the best but I didn't really want to sit here and brainstorm titles.)

Kim...was that kiss for real? I mean...never mind...Good for Ron. Oh! And Ron better get some payback before this is over!

LOL! I like this Isa character. Such a tease...Is Ron going to do what I think he is going to do? Lets just hope that he is going to wash his face with cold water...yeah...that's it...

Danny

Ron, Ron, Ron...you have too much of a heart...I KNOW that even though it sickens you to the very core, you're doing it for Kim...I would have throw up too if I was him...

Danny

Since this story is technically pre-StD, I'll let the Platonic love thing slide. I really enjoyed this story. I particularly liked the "short trip to the bathroom" remark. Everyone has had that one woman that they crushed on but was too old for them, and I think you handled that situation very well without it getting too awk-weird. I think Ron was very much in-character for this one, much like he was in "Blush." He's willing to help Kim enjoy her time with Josh Mankey if it means she's happy, and I'm glad to see that this aspect of his character is perfectly translated and expanded upon in this fic. Great job. This one's going on my favorites.

great story, i enjoyed it

Good story! I loved all the chapters too!

Ron truly did the best thing for his friend even though everyone seemed to think it was for Josh, even Kim.

The end reward for Ron after telling Kim was GOLD! 24K! :)

I laughed when I read about Ron's plan to get back at the woman, I wonder what her reaction will be and if she will actually keep to her promise? LOL!

very nice. that was a great read. true to each character, something not easily achieved. y am i talking like this? *clears throat* man that was awesome. great story. i was hanging on every word. kudos.

I liked the story, true to the series. Well played.

Very nice :)

very nicely done. the plot, style, everything. good work!

Definitely interesting. The thought of including another girl is definately a bonus. Keep up the good work and update soon.