It was a friend of mine who actually recommended that I read this little fic . I definitely don't regret. Its short and amusing. Mamoru is drunk and the reader really understand his confusion since it' s written in a way that the audience is just as lost as he is with the conversation . My only advice is to be mindful with the diction. Using words like "thingy " take away some of the sophistication of the writing, which is certainly there in other instances. Also , some of the inner monologue by mamoru seems to not flow all too we with the scenes.
Other than that though I was mostly definitely a fun, funny , entertaining light read. Good job!

OMG I laughed so hard

Scarred for life... Geez

"Neph, this is Mamoru we're talking about here. He's practically a eunuch! It shouldn't be too hard to ignore five naked women around him!"

can't stop laughing when i read this! totally awesome!

jajajaja confessions of dunk guys jajaja i really love it! Jajajaja poor jadeite! Jajaja

That was absolutely funny! I can't stop laught for a while what was a problem because I read it late night and people don't like be woken at 3a.m. hahahahaha

I'll search for others of your stories, I really liked this one.

Congratulations!

PS: My english is not perfect, sorry for any mistake

Hee hee the boots! I think that was my favorite! Much love for this! I think you captured their personalities perfectly.

That is hilarious! I am laughing so hard.

Hi! I just re-read this after a couple of years... And my reaction is still the same-this is a great ficlet. I love anything with the shitennous interacting (even if one gets hurt in the process) and anything when they're expressing their love for the girls. Great job. I've read your other fics; you do dark very well, but I'm surprised at how adept you are at humour! Great job.

**I love Zoi's flying cocktail umbrellas!

That was great, and totally in character for all of them too. I liked Mamoru's rather fragmented drunken thoughts - and I agree, Jadeite -is- sneaky

Fabulous story my friend, absolutely bloody hilarious! I loved it!

I like this story. It's really funny. But there's one thing I don't get;

“Jadeite—“ Mamoru tried, hoping to stop Jadeite’s speech before all three other Shitennou went homicidal on him. But the youngest general hushed him with a gesture; oblivious to the seething friends he was leaving in his wake.

In the bit above, who are you talking about? Because Zoisite is the youngest, but here you say Jadeite is, and that's wrong. Or maybe you were talking about Zoisite, but then the "...oblivious to the seething friends he was leaving in his wake," wouldn't make sense.

LMFAO! This is hysterical! I sent this to ALL my friends who like/ know Sailor Moon and they all agree!

Wow your sucha great writter! I read most if not all of your other Sailor Moon Ami/Zoi stories and they where great

OMG! I absolutely love this! Its hilarious! going on my favorites for sure!

This was a great story.

Laughed my head off :D