Aw! This was one of the best Raph stories ever! ;) Good job!

this was awesome, i liked it lot. maybe u can do each perspective from each turtle, that would be cool. incidentelly, u may have been told this already, but the episode is called Worlds Collide. Someone may have already told you but I thuoght I might add it. LOL

:) Not bad

Loved it, this is a really amazing peice on the depth of some of Raphael's greater emotions. Kudos.

I remember those ones! Just not the one with the merging thing. There were car races. I was sad.

Your third sentence has too many "you"s in it. Seems a few errors slipped by your editing process.

LOL! humiliated by the guy using a belt on them! hehe.

Aw what a sweet little one-shot and a nice little turning point! Now Raph just needs to learn to open up to his bros like he can to Master Splinter. Raph doesn't want to become the like the Shredder and here's hoping that he makes the right choices. He's a good guy, just a little angry, and needs to learn to work through that, but I think he can do it.

Raphy-boy does have a soft spot for his family. He may not say it, but he does love them and shows it in his own way through his actions! Aw. One thing you do NOT do and live to tell the tale is mess with Raph's family! hehe.

Very nice little one-shot!

Cheers,

~pacphys~

Aw...I've noticed over and over again, the one thing that can illicit the softness out of Raphael (esp in the cartoons) is the worry that something has happened to one of his brothers. He has a hard exterior, and he keeps them at arms length, but man is he ferocious when it comes to protecting them! Some people may argue with me on this, but of all of them, I think that he would be the most likely to give his life for one of his brothers. If you're a fan of extreme angst along these lines, I would love to recommend Danger Incarnate and s979's "Where are You?" (there should be three s's, but the review editor will delete two of them). This is the only fic that has ever mad me CRY. And I mean CRY. But beware, it does have some rough material...

Okay, wrap up time! Nice job Chibi girl! I enjoyed!

~SASS

Okay, so I haven't seen the eppies, but I'll try to get through this anyway. Here goes...

How sweet. Raph opening up to Daddy Dearest about his innermost fears. I'm just like him, actually. In general I'm a really open person. I often blurt out impulsive comments without thinking the very least about the consequenses. And while other people often get embrarressed about my behavior, I rarely get so myself.

But when it all comes down to it, my innermost thoughts are hidden inside myself. Whenever anything bad happens I lock myself up in myself. I don't know why I do that, though. I don't like accepting help from others. I feel like I can handle it best on my own.

It's weird. It's so easy for be to burst out laughing. But it really takes something really powerful for my to cry - and even when I do I won't let anyone comfort me. I'd rather not have them see me at all.

Wow, I don't know why I just said all that. I guess your little one shot on Raph made me relate.

I think it was beautiful. I wish he'd crawl out of his own skin and turn to his brothers once in a while. We can't have him having some sort of emitional breakdown, right. People need Raph!

AW! That was so cute.

I did something I hadn’t done years. I cried. WHy does this line look familiar? Hmm..Just kidding. KIDDING! ;)

This story was really good and powerful. One thing though, you got the order messed up. The haunted house thing came AFTER Leatherhead attacked Mikey. Or maybe I missed something in the story?

Anyway, great one shot.

I haven't seen the new cartoon episodes in ages so the events that lead up to this are a bit hard to relate to.

Still I like the fact that Raph felt he could at least go to Splinter and explain his problems and fears. I can also see how all the sort of events could lead up to Raph feeling of absolute terror that he had lost Mike.

A nice little one shot.

You love the new TMNT as much as I do. I feel like I'm part of some secret club now, knowing what episode you were refering to in you story. Some minor errors (kaboskabobs)but on second thought that may not be your fault. Typos happen. Just remember to look over your stuff a litle more and that the spellchecker is your best friend, really. Otherwise than that, another excellent story