::sniff:: I was crying when Trunks found Gohan's school books and was just in the house in general! You have got to be the best writer I've seen in a long time, and I was telling my friend this story seems like something I'd write. But back to the point, you rock and so does your fic!

Very well written. I enjoyed it. It almost gave a new perspective about their life.

very touching story- and i love your explanation for how he got his sword! you're a great author- you did an amazing job with this

*sniff* that was so beautiful! And to have it Trunks' point of view was such a good idea. Way to go!

Awwwww! *sniffles* That was sooooo ... ooo I can't describe it bu tit had me on the brink of tears! I loved this story!

Boo! Hi QG! _ I remember reading this when you posted it on the BG!

VERY VERY well written! Great details and great message. Amazing work!

Very nice! You've got a good handle on descriptive language and narrations.

I haven't read very many fics that deal with Trunks's life immediately after Gohan's death, so this was very interesting. I thought that the fight with the :::proceeds to butcher spelling::: Jizouningen was realistic. Also, it's nice to finally know where he actually got that damned sword of his.

*huggles* Keep writing, dear sister. P

~Ryze~

How sweet!

Woah. I'm almost crying. Not that it was sad, but beautiful. You have an awesome amount of talent. (10)

*sniff* THAT WAS SO SWEET!

i love this story! it's short and sweet.

Awwww... very cute story. It reall was touching, and the details helped me to really envision everything.

2 points, though - DBZ being Japanese, they probably wouldn't celebrate Christmas - though I have seen the picture you describe with all the characters in Santa hats.

The other point being, I thought it odd that Trunks found the axe heavy, and had to drag it along from Goku's house - yet he fought the jinzoungen and was able to lift Bulma in the end so she could reach the top to put on the star. That's one heavy axe!

And have you ever seen a 13 or 14 year old sit on his mother's lap? (Sorry, I know that was 3 points, I lied...) All the things I pointed out, though, were really minor and the story was really nice overall. Keep up the good work. :)

Oh that was really sweet I feel sorry for Trunks. He is so cute. Anyway I liked the part when he went into Goku's house. I had TEARS in my eyes. All in all a very good story!