Holy mother-fricking sh*t that was good! OMG that was so sad... and slightly confusing... I love stories like that! Yes, I cuss badly. I am not afraid to use the lord's name in vain lol jk

Oh my God...oh my God, that was so good. Wow. Definitely very moving. Wow again.

i dun really get it.

So beautiful... so sad. This definitely goes up on my favorites list, and you along with it. Wonderful work here...

That, my friend, was depressing but all the more beautiful... wow.

wow. this was good, i got kind of lost when they were alive, then dead, and alive again. but it's really good. i wished i understood it better though darnit. but it love it!

This is beautiful! I don't really get it, but that's my fault and I'll understand it a few days from now, but for now I'm just awed by the awesome writing style. It was truly beautiful. Soo good. Wow.

Oh.. I loved it. Be happy, I actually spelled "love" right in honor of this review!

You're stories are amazing! Keep going!

-I just got lost in thought. It was unfamiliar territory.-

[noey]

This is SO good, but SO confusing. I have no clue what's going on at all. Hahaha. Sorry, maybe I'm just stupid...I loved the 'inhale, exhale' then the 'stop' at the end. I'm guessing she either died or she was so shocked to see him she held her breath for a sec. Hmm. Either way, I really enjoyed this...I wish I could have it cleared up though. *sniff* But, it's such a beautiful piece of work...

Oh, wow that was good. I cried. What inspired you to write this? It's very heart-wrenching. *sob* I need a tissue...