Okay once again nice chapie. But the events in the story go rather fast. U need to slow down some and explain whats goning on a little more. Like how did Zacura's siblings die. u just said that they died. Thats probably why your chapies are so short, but dats ok. And this chapie wuz long. All and all, dont sop, I luved the Kurama and zacura mate thing (teehee)

Oh an done more thing, hiei doesn't say Im sorry! I dont thin that's even in his vocab. lol

You updated! Well, I guess I am one to talk as I have had some issues updating my own stories...anyway, great job, I can't wait to read more!

Once again, good chapie.

Keep it up kay?

Well, this looks promising! I am highly interested in seeing where this goes. You have a lot of talent, keep up the great job!

sry 4 another short chp. but i promise that they will be longer.

ur a very good riter. almost as good as me.

heh, heh, heh...

better rite more tat wuz a good story.

excellent detail its ok its a little sort _

sry that it is so short. the chapters coming are to be a bit longer.