Spot on! Loved it and hit me right in the feels. I've always had a little difficulty relating to the older characters in Naruto, but this story has really changed things.

Beautiful. I'm in love with your stories. Do you mind if I use some of the characterization of the Sannin in my own story? Do drop by and read it some time

Very angsty, but I love it! The sannin break up is so sad at the end...Very well done :)

Ah sweet melancholy, why must you always speak the bitter truth?
Absolutely captivating, deep and well-written! I've always wondered what reactions Tsunade's absence caused and your was just - brilliant!
This story really left quite an impression on me!

i love this. you write orochimaru so well, and the way he and jiraiya once were is something to think about. jiraiya at the end is a bit heartbreaking, but i don't blame him for feeling that way.

thanks for sharing.

Entropy is something God forced upon us so we would never attain his might. And I will no longer stand for it.”

gods, i love this. he's right (human and cruel experimentation aside). Playing God is such an odd phrase. after all, who says what right god has? it's a matter of personal belief, that's all. putting all that aside, it's people who affect people, people who kill people, people who save people, judge people. lawyers doctors soldiers society. deciding who lives or dies? we do that ALL the time. hypocritical indeed.

So professionally written! The characters were true to the originals, the storyline believable and the dialogue spot-on for them.

...if this story had been, like, 2 paragraphs longer, I swear I would have started crying in the middle of my living room. T.T Very sad, but beautifully writen. A rather startling insight to what happened to the Sannin. Great job! .

T_T Aw! So good and so sad! Well done. Great Job!

Tragic. But lovely all the same. This just depressed me something terrible, but I loved it all the same. Great work, like always.

Solid, Solid writing with a charactorization and insight to the Toad Sanin I've never seen befor and throughly enjoyed.

i liked it but it is a lite...alot sad

ANGST.

*sniff* so sad...

Yours is a quite original story on how Konoha -and its people- was like before we saw it in the manga. A really interesting view on it, and them, that I really liked, even if it's depressing in more than few ways.

Great story.