A great story. Very good.

**sniffle.** Ooooh, where do I begin? I do believe this is your best story ever! You have a great imagination, creating a life and past for a character who was on screen for maybe two seconds! :) Very kewl! _ I luv the thought of Tarpals fainting at the news that Jar Jar is to become a general . . . too funny! _~ And the battle and end scenes . . . **sob** . . . My favorite part has to be where Tarpals is comforting Jar Jar :) Sweeeet . . . Oooh, I also like the part where everybody's toasting and then Jar Jar is so horrified to discover he's drinking liquor! Hehe . . .

My eyes were getting suspiciously moist at the end. This was a great story. You have a lot of talent, girl. Keep up the good work! -Masquerade

I stand in awe. Beautifully written, with descriptive language galore. Only complaint that I have is trivial, really... You should have chaptered it, it holds the readers when it's in bits, plus if you have to leave off in the middle of it, it's easier, blah blah blah. I only hope that I can be as good as an author as you are! _ Grrrreat story!