update

The storyline is very nice, it's really to my liking
Thank you for writing this, and it'll be my honour if you would continue this story
Thank you

love this story can't wait for another chapter

Real shame it has only 5 chapters.

Why the hell aren't you writing anymore WRITE MORE

I really hope you write more of this even though it looks like you haven't in a while.

Come on write I've been waitin man

I love ur how u write it I'm so addicted to the story please write more. I think u r really funny to. I hope this modvates u

i dont know why but i hope orochimaru gets hit by a bus, freaking bastard
but i like bad boy/man Sasuke he is hot... a bit to aggressive but it may sweet him
kyubi is interesting but also a mean old bitch.

poor Naru to been so manhandelt, i think they are good for each other Sasuke needs Naru so he wakes up and get stronger to come away from Orochimaru, and Naru needs somebody strong and possessive, who only has eyes for him and brings out his fighter side...they will never have a day with nothing to do
and maybe thats the way he can get Sasuke away from the old pedo...

please come back one day and write more chaps, i really want to know what happens next

...its now 2014

Please update soon ! I can't wait to read what happens next :D ! Bye

I can't wait to read more.:)

I love you.
Why won't you finish it?

This is a really interesting story. I hope you update soon.

I'm very much in love with this story! It's keeps me on my toes and hungry for more! Thank you!

PLEASEEEE MOOOOORE! u know what!
just stop with everything ur doing! okay just stop with eveything!
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have u stopped now?
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good
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noooow go to the computer, yes just right that.
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sit down and write! .
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i just gonna take a chair and sit right here next too you *takes a gun out* plz just contiue writing *smile*

REALLY GOOD STORY LOOVE YOU