Reviews for Underworld
Alexia chapter 2 . 12/10/2016
Would you mind if I wrote a story about this concept?
Here Though You've Forgotten chapter 3 . 1/1/2006
wow this is really interesting i like it alott! please dont abandon it! please update!
Marbles-n-Mush chapter 3 . 5/17/2005
this is a fricking amazing fic and you have to keep udating it because i am having a blast reading it. i wish i had filled out the cc but didn't have time when it came to the NML but now that i see how it is put together i think you have the perfect cast for the perfect story! keep it up!

peace

Marbles~
FlamingYingYang chapter 3 . 5/2/2005
Hey there i've got to say that this is a really good story. So original. Can't wait to find out waht happens when the girls from the underworld have to become Newsies. Can't wait. update soon. Hawk
India chapter 3 . 3/21/2005
Update, Update, UPDATE! It's really good and you're tormenting me with short chapters lol. Keep up the good work
Air chapter 3 . 3/16/2005
*grins* It's really good! I like your story alot *nods* It's well written keep it up! Up date soon!
Fantasy3 chapter 3 . 3/11/2005
That was good. And sad. Poor little Half Pint- I can't believe Race would do that. But I feel bad for him, too... maybe things will be patched up? Eh... it was good, and I'm sorry for the delay, my show took over my life. Great job, and update soon, I really like this.

~Fantasy
Nosilla chapter 3 . 3/8/2005
Aw... mushy... he he Mush mushy...

sorry.

Please update soon.
Giggly Pancakes chapter 3 . 3/8/2005
OMG!

Ok I hadn't read this cause I thought it would be a Mary-Sue! SORRY!

Well i read it AND I LOVE IT! PLEASE KEEP GOING!

Pancakes
Bottle Cap chapter 3 . 3/7/2005
More. That's all I can say. I need more!
Bittah chapter 3 . 3/7/2005
Oh... twisted! I love it... write more! Please? no seriously.. you need to write more.. and soon darnit!
Knots chapter 3 . 3/7/2005
Yay i'm so glad you updated! And i'm in this chapter! hehe *Does happy dance* Jack is my prince? *Swoons* I cant believe race went after a 13 year old...tsk tsk that boy is going to pay! This story is really getting good. I cant wait for the next update! Hope it's soon! Keep up the Great work! CTB
Trixter chapter 2 . 3/1/2005
Great story just love it keep it up...

~Trixter~
Fantasy3 chapter 2 . 3/1/2005
I'm excited. And I gotta say, you introduced the characters nicely- that's always a hard thing to do (for me anyway, lol). This seems like such a good story, I love it. Update soon!

~Fantasy~
Fantasy3 chapter 1 . 3/1/2005
YAY TRAGIC! It's really good so far. I wasn't expecting the romance, but I like it a lot. I can't wait to read the next chapter... and LUCKY ME I CAN! lol. It flows really well, I love it. .

~Fantasy~
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