Another great fic! I love this pairing, and I wish there were more of it around here.D :

I enjoyed this fanfic a lot. I haven't many works centered on chaos and Canaan, but I really like your take on their relationship.

I liked this a lot. And yes, when I first saw his very first out fit I was kinda just... o.0 Personally, I liked hist second and third outfits the best though. lol

This is a great oneshot you have here. I love it a lot. I've only played halfway in the third game, but I'm already seeing chaos/Canaan moments that make me giggle. They're one of my fave XS pairings.

And I'm liking them even more since I've read your fics.

Very very good. I enjoyed it muchly.

Interesting. Even though Cannan was OOC it still was really good. Great job!

JA!

~EH~

[giggles] I really had a good time reading your fanfic, Maddie-chan :) It was cute. And touching. I think you did a good job portraying Canaan's mind (heck, so what if it's OOC? It's a fanfic!).

The part that got me REALLY laughing:

Then I saw those white shorts.

What are up with those things?

Did he even realize how many stares he must get?

I'm going to make an inference here and assume that you voiced your own opinion there ;)

Off to read "My Solemn Oath to You" now. Thanks for delivering such a good fanfic!

Well, in your game he might be wearing those white shorts, but in mine he's getting even more strange looks running around and fighting in a swimsuit. I need those skill point bonuses.. yeah.

I think you did a very nice job with chaos. He's a difficult character, I imagine, to write about since we know very little about him.

There's no chapter 2?

Aw

Hiya! I love this story! It's cute! I thought i was the only one who thought Canaan and chaos would be a good yaoi couple! ehehe... Anywayz... i thought that Canaan would be more... erm.. Yuki-ish ( from Gravitation... if you haven't watched that... then he's kinda cold n harsh but he looks out for the ones he loves!)

I loved the part about chaos' shorts! I hated those things in the first episode! Wellz, KEEP WRITING! bye bye

Ooh, yay for you! Just...because you can sum up the way of thinking that way in an almost...human way. (Is that wrong to say? 0.0) But this was good, well written, and all that fun stuff.

(And the pic ye were talking about...the new official one...*dies*)

Ooh! I love! My favorite parts:

"He smiled my way. I was content.

Then I saw those white shorts.

What are up with those things?

Did he even realize how many stares he must get?"

"Same white hair.

Same dark skin.

Same green eyes that looked to have lived through an eternity.

And saw all the sorrows in between.

Same old chaos."

Excelent! There should be more chaosxCanaan out there.

awesome. amazing. perfect. i totally loved this. i hope you will write another cannaan/chaos story, since this one turned out so well.

This is very well written. Very believable, and in character from Canaans point of view. I loved the way that he describes chaos, saying that he has records of white hair, but never on one so young, as well as records of green eyes, but none that shine like his do etc. etc. Those three lines...they were awesome. Very profound, and exactly what you would expect from a Realian observing a boy with Chaos's unique looks, and yet...even though i'm sure its done unintentially, it also comes out slightly sweet/romantic, but in an unsappy sort of way. I loved it . I also enjoyed how he scanned him and came up with nothing. While playing Xenosaga II, i kept coming upon Observational Realians on the Durendal who mentioned how they couldnt scan chaos correctly, and one even mentioned that there are really no personal files on him in that sense. So, it was interesting to how you dealt with that. I liked the four sentences dealing with how chaos never gives a straight answer etc. (was all very true ). How Canaan is confused by his emotions is very realistic, as well as amusing. So, those feelings only come out when chaos is around *winkwink*? I loved how he said that chaos is gorgeous to anyone with eyes, artificial of not. Nice little touch there. God, and the bit about the white shorts and the stares he must get? *laughs* Very well done. Canaans realization that chaos loves Kos-Mos was sad to read, especially when one read the line: "I wouldn't quite be telling the truth if I said I didn't care that those green eyes were looking at her instead of me." Touching, yet once again in a nonoverlysappy way. And the bit about Shion fawning over chaos was amusing *chuckles*. And how chaos said they were comrades in the end...fitting (even if Canaan, and fangirls like me wouldnt mind if they were more ), and incharacter from chaos's PoV. This story was interesting, not sappy, sweet in an unconscious way, in character, and with an over all slightly melancholic air to it all. In one word, it was perfect. No line was unneccesary or out of place. You seem to have captured Canaans character, as well as chaos's character through Canaans eyes. Very, very, very well done. I DO hope to read more from you involving this series, perhaps even a story with multiple chapters...please?

Wow, that was really cute! I think you should make this into a chapter fic, I love your style, wouldnt mind reading more of this!