I wish you'd finished this...it's such an intriguing story :(

What? Is that it? Oh please write more, you can't end it like this. please more!

Interesting story title - Sing the Sorrow? Are you an AFI fan, by any chance?

Anyway, this is a wonderful fic. A few typos, but I forgive you. ;) I'll check back later for the other chapters.

Dear Twistedreamer,

Your story was rather mesmerizing. I felt that you did an exceptional job at keeping the characters’ original personalities. I highly encourage you to continue your fine works of literature. In addition, if you are seeking a story with spontaneous humor, I highly recommend the delightful story King Dumb Heats. I’m sure you will love the random comedy.

Sincerely,

Hyper Works

i only read part of it but you just need to fix a few grammar things if you can i can help. let me know.

Interesting. Not an empty compliment. I *am* interested in seeing this play out. You have some typos that are slightly distracting, but not horrific. "Defiantly" instead of "definitely" is one spell checkers never catch, for instance. A good beta will help with those minor problems.