Reviews for The Carriage
zulka chapter 1 . 6/9/2019
I love it! It was absolutely beautiful! I have recently decided to re-watch Inuyasha, and I just love Sesshoumaru and Rin, and this was perfect. Thanks for writing! :)
beapleites chapter 1 . 5/16/2016
This was so touching...
overninethousand chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
hi there;
sesshomaruandrinfaq . blogspot . com

sesshomaruandkagurafaq . blogspot . com
MissMileyRaion chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
Wow, I feel so... lonely. Very well written, it feels real, you know? You kept Sesshomaru-sama well within character. Congratulations.
pisquenta chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Beautyfully written, It's the first fanfic I read in almost one year without it...
In Memory Of Yesterday chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
It was great and very sesshy-ish! 5/5
penny dreadfully chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
Wow, very sweet. You really got inside of seshomaru's head. The carriaeg theme was inspired. I liked the Inuyasha mirror. Good choice
ten.thousand.spoons chapter 1 . 4/16/2008
Oh, wow. That was defiantly a treat. The characterization is marvelous, and the analogy of the moving carriage was perfection. Very well done.
Ayrith chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
This stilts my heart the same way it did when I first read it two years ago. Achingly lovely, in all its glory.
Redmage2 chapter 1 . 2/22/2007
What a wonderful and moving piece! I especially love the last line..
harvest x moon chapter 1 . 10/29/2006
this was simply beautiful. your portrayal of Sesshoumaru was so believable, and very sad. i liked the way inuyasha jumped from the carriage, saying he “didn’t like aniki’s stupid cart anyway.” that seems so much like the inuyasha we all know and love... this is also a much nicer early inu-sess relationship than the you're-a-dumb-halfbreed-so-i-want-to-exterminate-you that appears everywhere.

I loved this, period. except now i have to go cry

*crying face, since my smiley's not working*
natuchka chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
A few spelling and grammatical errors here and there, but otherwise the story is fine. Nicely composed, quite redundant towards the end though. But as said before, enjoyable. Samsara, when included into a story believely, always makes it interesting after all.
heka chapter 1 . 3/4/2006
very well done! whe i like the analogy of the carriage and how people got on and off... :) and i like the last sentence, the finaly one, where you said he was her favourite mistake. :) COOKIES FOR YOU! i love your writing... keep writing! :D
cjflutterbye chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
That is lovely, poetic, sad and sweet. I just love - totally adore - your first paragraph. It is true and stated elegantly. Thank you so much for sharing.
Serihime chapter 1 . 11/13/2005
:) I must say that that was the best! I am very happy I decided to jump to page 30 of the Rin Sesshomaru section. I love how you write! All those words intricately wound together! It was splendiferous! Let's be frieds!
31 | Page 1 .. Last Next »