isnt the daydreaming danngerous when weapons are draw?ehehehe..they are equals!

Alex rocks. They concentrate on Goren way too much...even though I'm completely in love with him ;

This is great, but I have to mention that Alex was from Vice, it's something that they bring up a lot :)

Hmm. I like it. A very interesting interpretation of why she is the...well...the way she is.

:)

Blood and guts, however macabre they may have been, became my private Mecca, and I learned to examine victim after victim with a careful eye and artful study. I saw drug lords with gunshot wounds to the eye socket, housewives beaten to death with golf clubs, children shaken by babysitters, and homeless men gnawed upon by stray dogs. The dead spoke to me in ways the living never had, and I slowly realized that crime scenes told more about a person's life than their home or car ever could.

I would've thought that was Bobby, actually. Anyway, this was amazing; even with the slight plot-tweak of Alex working in homicide and not Vice. I adored this.

Excellent! I had to read this again! I really enjoy how you get into Alex's head. I can actually hear her voice when I'm reading. Always a good sign that the story is well written! I look forward to more!

Wonderful! I loved reading this because first of all, you are an amazing writer with vivid details and giving background for characters and secondly, Goren does need Eames, because they ARE the dynamic duo. I'm glad I got to read this!

it was really good.

I just wanted to say just how fabulous this story really is. It was written perfectly and I couldn't stop reading it. Alot of the time I find myself skipping parts of fanfiction but you had me hooked from the first paragraph. Well done.

Alex is my favourite character from the show because she presents more of a mystery to me and this story really shows her character just right.

Wendy

Hugs :)

This is exceptionally well-done. A wonderful ramble through Alex's childhood, youth and adulthood.

Awesome use of imagery and language, and the characterizations are right on target. Great way of showing that while Alex is Watson to Bobby's Holmes, she still is very much an individual with an important role in their partnership.

Bravo!

~Alamo Girl

This is absolutely THE BEST Alex characterisation I've ever read. You had me from the very first sentence and I just couldn't look away. Its insanely creative and was a pleasure to read. My favourite sentence is definitely the one you've used as the summary: the peanut butter had me grinning like a maniac.

However, because I'm not American and have never understood the whole PB&J thing, I may have interpreted it a little differently. It's called peanut butter AND jelly, so in the context you've used it, wouldn't Eames actually be the jelly since the PB is always listed first? But then, that's just my interpretation.

Nonetheless this piece is fabulous and I can't praise it enough!

Wow! That was awesome! I loved it! Great job, keep it up.

This was amazing! Truly amazing... thats all I can say!

I really liked that.

I think it's very fitting, very in character. She is very strong-willed, so this makes sense. The whole sidekick metaphor was put together nicely.

This has got to be one of the best stories I have ever read. Really, it has proper grammer, you tell the story so well, and you used the tenses perfectly. You also have the character of Alex Eames, down perfectly. I abosolutly loved it. And doing a little research on the character really helped too (ie. Joe, Joey). Keep writing!

Love

Julie

I don't really watch CI, but this story definitely drew me in. You've created a wonderful backstory and have written it remarkably well. I look forward to reading more of your work.