hey this is good are u going to kepp going with this?

oh. i normall don't like harryxginny fanfics. i'm all for dracoxhermione. but i'm really liking this one. xD

It's a good start! Update Soon!

OMG! I LOVED this! you get a rose! I've only just started makin them and i only gib them out to really great ficcies, but u so get one! ok TTFN!

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A few problems with spelling, first of all: barley("I barley talked to him"), fist("my fist year"), and of("He had to of known I liked him") are words, so I can see a spellchecker skipping over it, but that just highlights the need to proofread.

Also, you switch between Ginny's timeframe and Harry's timeframe after the sixth paragraph - considering this is told from Ginny's point of view, I'd stick to hers. I see this pretty often with main characters outside of Harry's year, but it's very important to pay extra attention.

Minutae aside, I'd say you should spend more time fleshing out paragraphs and sentences. As an example, the eighth and ninth paragraphs don't really have separate ideas, so there's really no point in separating them. Also, complex sentences are good.

I'm not sure if the casual voice is intentional or not. If it is, I would suggest you spend more time on emotion and feeling, rather than fact - between the very introduction and the last paragraph, basically the entire passage is spent on discussing fact with essentially no reaction on Ginny's part.

Good luck!