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Very nice, looking forward to the sequel

that was soooo good. I'm glad you're writing or have written sequel.

Jeniam, love your story but ya already know that! TeeHee! Just wanted to say it again!

Okay, Enough is enough, This is fanfiction, I do not want flames starting about something I wrote for fun, I fully admit that I am unable to read Kanzaka Hajime's mind. If there are points of contention email me and I will discuss my reasoning in a civilized manner. Too easy, but let's not get personal. I really do not like trolling.

It's a story people about another story based on my perceptions which are unique just as everyone else's are.

*SNORT* I know the novels very well, thank you very much. Ever bother reading QP/Diana's summaries of the novels? The novels are basically Lina & Gourry with Amelia and Zelgadis only showing up on occasion. As for the whole romance thing, um, if you don't think the end of the novels indicated that Lina was expecting Gourry to propose then you're an idiot. Be very careful about those that you insuly especially when they actually have more information than you. As to the author, like I said before, the idea of Xelloss/Lina is quite frankly stupid in the extreme. Do you understand Lina's personality or are you simply substituting your own for Lina's? As for the idea of Luna being nothing more than a bully, given what Lina did, Luna quite rightly should be angry with Lina. Selling a soft-core video of Luna is not exactly kosher.

Hey, to the person who sign earlier about Lina loving Gourry. Let me tell you! the Anime DEVIATES from the original Slayers which is really the Novels. If you every bothered to find out, you'd see that in the Novels. Kanzaka didn't really have a plan for the G/L you're smashing down people's throats. he doesn't care about romance and lets the fans decide for themselves. Why do you think he ended the series with a "?". Lina did NOT marry Gourry in the end, if that was Kanzaka's aim, they would have gotten together. Also, Little Miss Who thinks she has the damn right to think for us, I would gleefully inform you that what happened in the Anime is ALSO an AU. In the Novels (which is the ORIGINAL Slayers) There was NO KISS. Gourry did not chase Lina into the Sea of Chaos. *snorts* because, if he did, he would have been blasted. I doubt highly the Mother of all takes well to intruders. But that part of Slayers NEXT did not happen. It was an ALTERNATIVE ending as well. So don't go around telling us what is right. Seriously, I love fanfics, in fact, thanks to Canon fans like YOU, I love Alternative works and can't stand the canon. If the work is good, even if it doesn't follow the 'canon' so what! IT shows you just how smart these people are. If you're going to review, don't hit them on bias. That shows people how close-minded, arrogant, immature and unfair you are. Besides, everyone is entitled to what they like. If it isn't what you like, don't read! You don't have to give a nasty review. And your review has no basis. It's preference, and that's fine with me. You like canon, I'll leave you alone, but don't you dare go around telling people to like what you like. You have no right to that and if you think like that, you have no right to the Net. It's a place of free speech

Anyway, to the author of this fanfic, good work, the imagination and plot of this fanfic is very unusual and gives the reader a wonderful story to read. Please finish it and ignore reviews that hit you for your bias. They have no right to do that and I think the only reason you're getting hit by it only goes to show that people *looks pointedly at person who had that stupid review* like these are jealous of your genius or works.

Kewl story...can't wait to see the ending...)

Another X/L fic. Really, did you watch the same Slayers as what was actually produced. No matter how you slice it, Lina loves Gourry and given that she was willing to destroy herself for Gourry, X/L is simply not a possibility. If you want to write a X/L fic, please make sure it is titled appropriately AU. Since this quite frankly isn't Slayers and I think people should be alerted to the fact. Do you fangirls understand what Lina considers important?

More more more...i can't wait to see what happens!

I just have to say that I LOVE your story! I really should be doing my homework but you got me hooked (bad girl!) Keep on writtting them, the story is great and I really like what's developing. Ciao!

CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE! Don't leave me hangin' like that! _

A great fic, wonderful pairing, intriguing idea. ) a tiny little suggestion. make the guy who followed Filia (the male dragon in human form who mentions Auntie Aqua in chapter 13) Milgazia of Dragon's Peak. It sounds like his character,actually. I love the fic! (waits for more)

I love you story Jeniam I like the plot and that chariter Melee was simply genuis I the unstableness of her chariter was refreshing (it seems I need some one to proof read for me) please keep writing this great story!

-Spell Weaver

well things are just moving along just fine...)... and you gave me the kiss that i waited for...thank you!...Þ...anyways i await anxiously for your next part!