James is rather sweet when he's trying to rail against
Fate in his last year never knowing their destiny yet
Secure enough to know that. Harry would be safe once
He got to hog lily loved pushing his buttons
Every year it became more amusing but growing up
Is actually great fun while still having fun times along
The way just look at Fred and George weasley .did he know that they would be murdered that night I think
So it was very tragic except it was written besides Harry
Had the weasleys . But you've completely written such
A fascinating spin on their memories its thoroughly
Refreshingly yet quite brilliantly moving in a original
Captivatingly wicked way plus there's something
Truly magical about this exceptionally warm hearted
Reflective humorous insightful ending to their love
Story it's totally unforgettable plus exciting so thank
You very much I've loved every single sentence its
Been magic Elizabeth skinner.
Could you please write some longer stories.

wow
this is a masterpiece.
damn it here come the tears :'(

This was absolutely beautiful - stunningly written and I loved the banter of the Maurauders. Thanks so much for sharing. I loved it

Brilliant, absolutely incredible. I cried tears of laughter, tears of happiness and tears of wonder at that beautiful ending!

Great job!

Well they might have been young but still occasionally
Mature for their ages and meant to be together which
Made the rather unique anyhow you never argue with
Fate although James would give it a very good try and
Win .jilly have a marvellous sense of the ridiculous as
We can see through that witty banter particularly his
Ego yet it worked very well as they married straight after
Graduation although I cried buckets of tears when boldly
Killed them they set the scene for Harry to carry on where they left off except to die that young its to sad.
You've captured James and lily so beautifully and sassy
Amid love laughter exceptionally wonderful sentences
Filled with loving humor and excellent well done
Version of James pouting ego congratulations its
Thoroughly a perfect my love Elizabeth skinner

I was laughing so hard while reading this spectacular
Story that I also started crying happy tears it's just
Such a hilarious funny heartwarming silly you have
A truly wonderful talent for bringing these crazy
Terrific characters to life although the final two
Sentences were a tiny bit chilly yet very memorable
Also,I'm going to say this only once even the vilest
Rat pettigrew was amusing before I remembered
What that foul creature did because of jealousy.
Thank you so very much I'm skinner

the ending was so sweet! :)

I really liked this story

Beautiful.
Perfection.
The end?wow.

I just...do you ever cry?

One of the best fanfiction a I have read in a long time.
It is exceedingly hard to ding a GOOD fanfiction, a fanfiction that makes you laugh so hard that you cry, and were the writer makes the characters out perfectly.
I literally have to search for a great fanfic, and it really is hard to find a really positively GOOD one.
Yours is a good one.

This was so, so, funny, so clever, very well written and beautifully done! Thank you for sharing.

THAT...THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!

That was absolutely hilarious!i laughed so hard i cried!

Amazing, by far, your story was the best one on here! Write more please! You have an amazing talent and made me laugh aloud!