| Reviews for The Unexpected |
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   ThatTerribleWriter78 chapter 4 . 6/30 w00t |
| SeiferBoy chapter 23 . 7/12/2018 I had fun while reading this story. I wish there were more! The description of Hitsuka perfectly describes Mitsuki, Orochimaru's son, in the Boruto series! The awesome thing is, Mitsuki was created like 5 years after this chapter came out! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/14/2018 Having the characters in your story acknowledge that what they do makes no sense is not an excuse for failing to instead write a story that DOES make sense. |
| LeBomb chapter 2 . 5/12/2018 stop interacting with Naruto please, he is annoying and the hokage will spy on him. |
| Lemonkittylove chapter 23 . 4/27/2018 i really love this story it's so difficult finding a really awesome male oc with an awesome plot to go with it! please somehow update this! |
| Guest chapter 8 . 12/27/2017 Please do that rewrite?! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 12/27/2017 This dropped, I'm assuming? It needs some editing, but I think it would be good if it was fixed up a bit. |
| Lost.Wolf.Lover chapter 9 . 11/9/2017 You mentioned English wasn't' your first language so I thought I'd point out that the phrases in this chapter are "jaw splitting" and " leaps and bounds". |
| Mizuki Shiki chapter 23 . 11/3/2017 Awwwww that's so sweet TvT... I'm begging ya pllleeeasssseee update soon |
| CoffeeAndWaifu's chapter 23 . 4/15/2017 Aww Why do all the bad things happen to hitsuka? Poor boy I hope u update soon! |
| biowolf864 chapter 23 . 4/1/2017 I just found this story and so far it's good!ω) |
| Guest chapter 23 . 2/21/2017 PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE UPDATE SOON |
| 27aquarrow72 chapter 23 . 2/8/2017 I love this too much and you just HAVE to stop. *sniff* |
| Scribleyellow chapter 23 . 7/3/2016 Please update and in the future make Haku his boyfriend lol |
| AkumaNoKoori chapter 21 . 4/25/2016 ya know, Haku's surname is Yuki since it was told in the anime that the Yuki Clan had Hyouton Genkei Kekkai. Thus Haku's surname is Yuki |
