...And then it's revealed Goku never kissed Chi-chi. Ain't that interesting?

I liked your story i thought she would've did all the work xD

Loved it!

I really like the way you express the feelings of Goku and Chichi it looks like its really happened in Dragon Ball the character are so natural..Love it .

Omg the sex was the wierdest part ever

Fuck you goku is my character and sex don't exist in this world fuck you I am gonna fuck your mom

I always kinda thought Chichi would just have to rape him... He's so Naive.

Hiyo! I am a fan of the Dragon anime as I have seen nearly all of them since adolescence. I just want to say thank you for this bit. Albeit short, however, there isn't any hint as to how a young Gohan came to be other than the "it's what mommies and daddies do when they've gotten married" in any of the show. Thanks for the read... But I feel like- since the conception of trunks and then pan were for the adult viewer-... C'mon, Goku's extension pole didn't pound the pie til chichi screams paddiecake? I'm tryna say that even the turtle hermit can express a more vivid description than ten minutes til goku is passed out with his hand on chichi's tummy... Kind of an event less honeyhoo, dontcha think?

cute ending

omg this some awesomeness

very nice, you should write bigger stories of this same genre

10 minutes? Thats a joke right!

Hmm... If you are going to add me to your favorites list, I only ask that you actually read my stories first and decide based on that. If I got it just for reviewing, I'd feel kind of cheap... Like a hooker... but with fanfiction...

It was really really really... average... It was decent enough writing, but it was missing that special something that makes fiction really enjoyable. It seemed like you were writing it just to get it done or to get readers and not because you were having fun. The part where Goku's instincts suddenly take over wasn't really all that believeable either... I mean, instinct counts for something, but I figure he'd need a bit more intsruction than that.

Also, if you're going to write a lemon, you need to make it very detailed. That was just too short and bland.

But I didn't hate it. I didn't love it, but I didn't hate it... It killed about 3 or 4 minutes...

I can so see that happening. nice by the way.

Aww, It was very cute at all the right times. You got Goku's innocence captured very well and yet didn't make him seem to dumbed down or incompetent. Wonderful little story. Great job!