I liked it.

I really like this - it is an interesting take. Of course, the assumption there is no attachment is often taken to mean there is no sex (or that sex is forbidden) but - as this story shows - it need not be.

The inclusion of the flashbacks, which we are to assume are of the prostitute, but then realize are of him and Siri, is a great technique.

Overall, this is a great story and contains some top-notch writing. I like it a lot.

loved it. kinda sad but a little more realistic than alot of other stories. i really like the flash backs. i thought it was great. but still, so sad... )

I read this on JC boards, I know, but when I saw it here, I wanted to read it again.

That's very nicely done, particularly considering I disagree with you on a theological basis—but it's tactfully done, well-written and…

Eh, whatever. I'm having trouble thinking clearly.

Keep writing!

oh wow... THat's so sweet and cute... OBi Wan really does need to be human and get laid. lol So I want to know what happened that night... COuld you write that perhaps? or get someone to? cause i'd read that...

*cries*

This is too sad! But too good, and too beautiful! *cries some more*

What a beautiful story. I love the Siri/Obi-Wan relationship. A job well done.

- Aelan

I liked it, even if it was short. Lots of Siri/Obi Wan.

Fantastic! I'm sorry it took so long for me to review, but I've been so busy I haven't been able to keep up with my stories. You know I love Obi Wan and Siri stories, and this one was so tragic just like their relationship. I loved it! Write more Siri and Obi Wan please!

Wonderful!

Wow.

I have read a lot of your stories, and I must say, I am very very impressed. I wish I could write like you do. Honestly! I think my favorite story was "The Cell". That was so beautifully written. This one is also another excellent one. It is so real, so.. real lol.

Please, keep up the great works!

Very nice - well thought out and well written. I love a good sad ending ;)

Wow that was uber-fantastic. I've never seen a piece about Obi-Wan written so well. Kudos to you.

oh... very good. also very well written. :):)

-jkk

this is an awesome story! such emotion, written VERY well. BRAVO!