But what was his reason for thinking to kill himself? He was literally coddled all his life. Maybe he couldn’t stand knowing he ruined Don’s childhood.

What do I think? I think this was AMAZING! It was realistic, full of emotion and just so good, I could really feel the shock Don received and I could picture everything so well...

Your wrote a delicate subject with sensitivity. I guess something like that could set Charlie off if he were feeling down at the time, being so sure you're right and no one hearing, screaming to be heard, and Don being Don, agent and big brother. Very nice! (don't ask about that middle comment, some of that episode hit way too close!)

poor Charlie...
but he's lucky to have Don as a brother

Great story.

one word, love :)

So fucking perfect. I just watched Structural Corruption and this was the perfect tag to it! As I watched it I was hoping someone would write something like this! :)

Great story! I really liked it.

Very well done

That was AMAZING! Depressing all the way but yes, awesome :)

Well done.

Natasa

Images of lost Charlie, both little & grown are so endearing and heartbreaking. Thanks for this story.

like it

that was good loved it

Guh. Fabulous. Just fabulous.

Very poignant and sincere, and not at all OOC. The Eppes boys aren't exactly known for their tears, but I think they're more than capable of shedding them when the situation calls for it-and if any situation calls for tears, it's this one.

I am especially pleased with how you handled a delicate subject. Painting the scene with words that brought the feelings of the moment to life, but without cheapening them or making it trite and cliche. Excellently handled. *applauds*

Thank you for sharing!

M

Oh, so SAD... but GOOD.