Excellent story! I greatly enjoyed reading it.

And did not the serpent deceive Eve?
I'm pretty sure that serpent was male too, btw...

I'm not sure if you'll ever end up seeing this but I can't find a tumblr or AO3 account that links back to this username. I just wanted to say how amazing and well written this story was. I just saw the Broadway show this past Saturday and have been doing for more. This fic has been everything I could have wanted. I loved how fleshed out all the characters were, and how clearly the emotions and body language of everyone you wrote shone through. I binged this story in three days because I just couldn't stop. You did a marvelous job on this, thank you for writing it!

I really like your characterisation of Carlota, so tactless and blunt but empty and lonely underneath. I love all the characters you created. Aria is absolutely adorable! Briell is so amazingly complex and compelling. Andrew is plain creepy. Bravo for this intriguing and unputdownable story!

Fave chapter ;) they're both so fierce. And passionatee

Nice story! I like it when Erik is happy!

As if Erik had chosen his deformity! So he does not deserve to be moved because of that?! Yes, his actions left much to desire but once un his love someone should show him love!

Beautiful. Perfect, really. The characters are amazing and rich. The storyline is just as wonderful and each moment prompted intense emotions that had me crying or laughing or angry or grinning. I adored this. Thank you so much.

Wait, when did Christine learn she was Madame Donovan and not Donner? O r did I miss a part?

oh boy oh boy professional killer hoooo boy! and andrew darling's got brother issues. hoho.

HRRRRGHHH Andrew is such an interesting character. If he wasn't so much in the way of Bri and Erik, I'd like to read more about him lmao.

"separation is torment" no? that's dependency which isn't healthy and the amount of trust the couple have would be non-existent if they are agonizing over it

THE THOUGHT OF ERIK AND LITTLE ARIA SCAMPERING AROUND THE SECRET TUNNELS TOUCHED MY HEART MORE THAN THE ROMANTIC MOOD OF BRI AND ERIK A FEW SCENES AGO QAQ ugh family feels! daughter and father!

Erik posting at r/oddlysatisfying, a picture of Brielle doing chores! LMAO

brUH I've seen a bunch of antagonists like Andrew before. He doesn't feel real cuz his actions don't feel human. Shows he's not actually right in the head... but I'd still like to adopt him. He'd make an interesting main character of his own twisted story.