Primus almighty! I nearly screamed when Jazz got shot,

And this was...before the movie? When...P...prowl got...NNNNOOOOOOO!

*clutches her head and flees the room, sobbing*

... J... Jazz? No... nooooo! Ah don' car' if it's ah dream, bro died!

wow, that was awesome. can you plz continue?

Oh my god. O.O

This scared me so bad, I almost screamed when he was shot!

From what I've heard and read, this foreshadows something really important...

O.O

Prowl...

Oh PRIMUS.

This is just before the movie, isn't it.

When he- oh GAHD.

Oh...

That just scared the slag outta me and made me wanna cry...

-cries-

Too late, it did make me cry...

Oh wow. This was very well written. I actually thought that Jazz was dead until the end. Keep up the good work! You write very good short stories.

Jazz died? *eyes water*

My chest suddenly became heavy...seriously!

That is some damn good foreshadowing. Makes me all sad too...

Nicely captured emotion!

Well, that certainly made me think a bit. Especially due to where Prowl really was... Nice job and good bit of foreshadowing. As always, your fics are excellent.

meep! ok that was random... but oh foreshadowing... nice.. it did get my attention )

Oh, Primus. This was so horrible, it was wonderful. Prowl dreaming Jazz's death, which turned out to be his own...

You've got both their characters down pretty good, I think, though there's not too much to judge it by; that's my only critique, too, that it's not longer.