Omfg updateeee

It was amazing! But is it done? Curiosity.

I can't stand fics like this. Simply can't stand them.

Good stories, very, very good stories... that'll never get finished. Never to be ended. So many plots left hanging. So many things that won't be.

It's been four years since you've updated. I doubt you're still around. But, if you ever come across this, if you happen to come back, please finish this story. It deserves an ending.

-N

great story plz plz update it soon

Hey where's the next part it's been almost 2 years sense your laswt update I see you might be nearing the end but this ain't it. I want the next part Please!

Wow that was an ammaxing chapter, the story is very well writen, so why havenm't you updated another chapter, plkease do so, please! This is one of the very good Terra Raven story's I'e actually found but it haven't been updated since 2006, plkease, please cntinue because I doudt this is the end unlkess you're doing a sequl.

Please update soon! The story just keeps getting more interesting by the minute! But I do have some comments in mind...

Not really what I expected of Terra, but considering what she had gone through, you had the story pretty much well thought of. No offense, but I LOVED the fight scene between Raven and Terra. Very descriptive and what not!

Keep going at it. You might become the next J.K. Rowling!

WOW. That last chapter was amazingly written.. as was the whole story. ]

Hey, you are back!

loved this chapter, cant wait for the next one, keep it up! I really like the way you write

oh how nice! good for Terra!

I've been waiting forever for this chapter! It was realy really good. Please update soon.

i hope that it will be a bb and rea ending i love bb and rea

bb and rea

makes my day

bb and rea

all the way!

omg! terra seems so horrible in this chapter!

quite a good story though

You're right, I'm not sure this chapter got across what you intended it to. It DID have meaning and didn't appear to be lacking anything, but the fight between Beastboy and Terra was vague. Neither side knew what they wanted, although that might be exactly what you were going for. Not OOC in any case, at least not for Terra. Beastboy, I don't know. Normally I wouldn't think of him as so indecisive, but you've written him to have an underlying affection towards Raven and that's affected his attitude toward Terra.

Cool though. No complaints

TERRA FOREVER! HAHA!

-ssj

Wow, they were both really cold to each other... "or do you always cry in your sleep?" I gotta say, that's low for Raven.

Terra was more harsh than I'd expected too. Excluding my opinion that she would not have known about Raven's experience with daddy, I couldn't help but notice her reverting back to the ole' Gray n' Orange. May or may not have been what you were going for; I'm interested either way.

Oh, one last thing. You seem to have an abundance of literary quotes in mind (or maybe just the two). I'll give you one thing; they've both been quite applicable to their respective situations. But you should work on integrating them more into the writing. When you take the time to mention who said it or wrote it, we as the reader have to step completely out of your story to think, "Hmm, Poe..." and then find our places back in it. Instead of showing us that you know who said it, work it better into the flow of the story. In my opinion, the quote in this chapter should have read something like:

"He felt as though an iron hand had clenched around his heart, and could see that even for Raven, one whom life and death are equally jests, there are matters of which no jest can be made."

Maybe put a foot note or something if you want to credit the quote's original author.

I don't mean to sound overly critical. On the contrary, I am greatly enjoying this story and, believe it or not, am glued to my screen. Everything I haven't commented on is, in my opinion, awesome.

TERRA FOREVER! HAHA!

-ssj