You wrote exceedingly well; and it's such a nice rarity to have a story where all the parties involved got honest and fair treatment. I hope, one day, you will be motivated to write again.

I liked all the mixed emotions and feelings Grissom managed to let out. The uncertain future, the fear, the doubt, the epiphany, the question, the hope, the fear, and not knowing, not finding and not having answer made Grissom solid and real. Would he have the courage to stride down a new path? Would he change and mend his ways? Could he? I am not sure if Sara ever wanted children; but I feel It's kind of cruel if the option of choice was taken away from her. This was a very honest and balanced piece of work. It left everything unsettled, and I liked it that way. Having said, the images of purple blizzard and Sara riding a unicycle somehow made it seem there's hope after all, you know?

An exceptional story and still grabs me every time I read it. It painted such a vivid picture of the inner working of Grissom. I can hear Grissom's voice in my head.
It also speaks a lot about Sara's "family" at work place.
Sofia's absence in the sick room speaks volume. What a brilliant touch.
After all these years, I still want to smack her.

Brilliant story.

You cannot stop there! What happened next!

what! you cant leave the story here... what about sara?

Hi Mossley,

Although I've always enjoyed reading your work, I am unsure if I left reviews or a quick word of thanks for sharing your talent. If I haven't, please know I appreciate your committed efforts and I am often amazed by the passion and quality your writing reveals.

*hangs head and kicks dirt on shoe* That said, I cannot believe it took me three years to read "Pax Vobiscum"! You had me from the beginning and kept me compelled throughout, hanging on every word. So it begs the question: is there more? In the three years since, have you written a companion piece to this brilliant story? If so, please let me know. If you haven't, please consider. I would love to read more.

Thanks again and take care,

- Your friendly GSR fanfic reader

This story is amazing! I would love a sequel...to see where thins go from here!

I love this fic. And it just really cries out for a sequel. Please?

Would you PLEASE continue this! i love it so much.

OMG Were is the rest...?

Please for the love of god and my sanity please give me more...

I am a selfish person and I NEED MORE!MORE MORE

If I play on your ego will that help you write faster...

This story is frekishly amazing andI am far past hooked!

Your a genious Please give me more. Waiting Mindy M.

loved this piece

so sad but so beautiful and true

I love the story, but the ending? Is there like a sequel or something? Is Sara gonna live or die? I wanna know.

We demand a sequal to this beautiful story.

Chant along with me fellow Geek lovers!

Se-qual! Se-qual! Se-qual! Se-qual! Se-qual! Se-qual!

Mossley? Sequal!

Pretty please with GSR on top of it?

Hey, this is a great story! I really love that the story is read as Grissom's point of view on things, it's different than most fan fics I've read recently. The only thing that I must say, is that you should continue on this storyline and make it longer, because I'm really eager to see what happens in the end.. if they have a happily ever after, or the end is tagic (though I hope not..)

Anyways, great fan fic, and continue writing stuff like this! You have my word!