squeel!

Ah, so beautiful!

this is kinda sad... plz update quickly! i wanna see how a rainy day oneshot turns out! PLEASE? *turns chibi, Tsuzuki puppy eyes, tail wagging, begging* update another chapter? please?

i love all the little things in this like the laundry buzzer, the lightbulb that's dim and bursts into life and dims and dims again...it ties so much in with..real life...but still the story feels so lonely somehow.

I got the feeling, from this fic and the other one, that the world is on mute as Tsuzuki moves through it.

In a way, it is true.

I loved your words, and the way you shaped them. It made me choke, that Tsuzuki is so sad. It is like there is nothing else, but Hisoka keeping him together.

Thank you very much for sharing.

after a third reading, i've noticed even more imagery usage than the first time! this piece is most definitely the best i've seen on yet!

your word choice and overall description is stunning in terms of building the overall feel of the piece! this is the best writing i've read on yet~~!

...oh... ... this was... one of the least fluffiest pieces i've read yet... and yet it's so good... it was so melancholy, like you _felt_ for poor Tsuzuki, and it was so well written! Incredible... it made me feel kinda sad and slow, the rainy feeling really was gotten across well... oh... I don't know, it was just sad and slow, but don't mistake me, I was surprised that something so ... _physically_ unfluffy was still so emotionally fulfilling and good and fluffy still. I mean, there was almost like a _rhythm_ to the fic.

*in awe* It was incredible, really. Adored it... definitely different than any otger YnM i've read so far... gosh, how _good_... the first statemnt, about it being the unfluffiest, was not a criticism or complaint at all. it was a surprised observation, that there really wasn't anything touching, any little sacred Hisoka curling up to Tsuzuki, adorable as taht is, this was very much different... angsty... but in a... melancholy way. I don't know, I've read over a thousand fics (literally)and I think this is the first one that was... like this... Incredible job... *still in awe*

wah.

beautiful. Very vivid, and i love the imagery used.

I'm checkin' out ur other stories now. (if you have any)

keep it up!

-Jay

Oh, that was just... beautiful and angsty and ... lovely. Simply wonderful characterizations. I really enjoyed this and you could just *see* this happening. Good job. _

Lovely and touching. I've always liked your unique story titles. )

You never see stories like this. It was interesting, but kind of sad for some reason.

P.S. I LOVE YOUR SCREEN NAME!

...i feel touched... i really do

this fic made me emotional, but uniquly. I'm bursting with happiness, nor am i on the verge of tears. it just made me emotional, and i like it

thank you for writing this

This was a very good story! It had a soft, quiet feel too it. Soothing in a way. It kind of reminded me of a really old home video where there is no sound and you're just watching what's going on. At least that's the feeling I got. Good job!