i never thought of it that way. not really anyway. that remus loved her, but didnt love her fully as she needed. he loved the perfect part of her in spite of her flaws, while james loved her because of them. this piece was simply wonderful. thank you.

Like it, definitely. I love how you wrote it in second person, one doesn't see that much.

She fell for him, fell hard, fell fast, in a way you could never imagine because you never fell in love. Your love for her just happened gradually, comfortably.

I actually believe it to be the other way around. Lily falling for Remus quickly, yet slowly starting to like James. But it's your fic, so I'll just shut up now. :)

Yay, I just hit the fifty favorite stories mark!

-Many schnugs!

wow! i loved it! at first i thought it was a hermione/harry/ron thing, but this was way better! keep it up!

Mrs. Black

Wow, I like this a lot. I am absolutely in love with your amazing power of description. My writing style is sort of similar to yours. Read some of my stories if you want. I know, shameless solicitation, but you might like them, because their sort of like some of yours.

~*~Emili~*~

Love it! Really well written, and it holds very much anger and sadness...great!

i LOVE it!

great work...bye!

BB

aw poor Remus, i feel really bad for him, great detail, i enjoyed it very much

So much detail. Ah, so much detail.

-Kimberly-

It was great..poor Remi, he should get the girl every once in awhile )

LOVED IT! But whose pov is it? I thought it was James, but the monster comment threw me off. I really like this story; it's definitely going in the faves colomn. I love how you describe Lily- perfect! The whole 'urn' thing creeped me out. Where I'm from, and urn is something you put cremated ashes in. I'm assuming you mean a vase. I was having a hard time picturing James/Remus throwing a dead person around. Or, having a dead person in the common room. Lol.

Great story! LOVED IT!

Huffah and the maddest of props to you,

Ta~

*Austin

Loved it! Loved it!

I know this is a stupid question...but...was it Remus or James who took Lily away from the other? Well, I mean, who did Lily fall in love with the second time? Because it's pretty vague the way you put it. I mean, well...it's confusing to me. I'm not one of those readers who can understand characters well, or concepts or anything. I get the feeling it was Remus, but hell, whatever, because it was amazing anyway. Keep it up.