This is really well written, and I enjoyed reading it (which is really saying something, as I don't like reading about sad things).

I like that Ryou wasn't wallowing in self-pity even as he was dying, and that he tried to distract Yuugi and get him to be happy.

Juggling Yuugi is an interesting idea. I certainly haven't come across it before.

You did a very good job with this. :)

~YukinoKara

That was horrible!

I mean, you write well - wonderfully, in fact - but you killed Ryou!

I know it's not the end... reincarnation and what have you, but still... my Ryou is gone... *sniff*

*sigh*

~ Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write. Read. Dream.

what in the world dose he mean its not the end for Ryou? what the heck happened to him? were is Bakura? what did Ryou mean they were in that part of town for him? im so confused though its a great fic id love some answers or a pointer to a fic that may give some still good fic!

Bakura - (holds C.H.T. against the wall by her throat) why?

C.H.T. - (choking) I-d-di-didn't ki-ii-ll hi-ii-im!

(releases her)

C.H.T. - ask Ocean, but don't kill me...Idiot Tomb Robber...

Bakura - what did you say?

C.H.T. - I said Ryou is alive and he wants to talk to you. can i make my review now?

Bakura - meh...

C.H.T. - well, That is one of the few sad fanfics that actually brought tears to my eyes. it was beautifully written. I'd give you homemade cookies if it hadn't urged the Tomb Robber to attempt to throttle me then leave my body hanging from my ceiling in my mind room (its a place where i go when i daydream, especially in class).

Bakura - sorry about that!

So sad *sniffle*

T_T

I say you captured Ryou's character pretty much it: strong yet delicate, thinking of others first instead of himself.

Poor Ryou. ;_; He didn't deserve all those cuts. / Though I'm happy for the YY moment at the end. *sweatdrops*

I made me cry! Now my mom wants to know what the hell upset me... You write so well! Poor Ryou; you captured him perfectly. 'It's not his fault', Ryou would never blame Bakura, he loves him too much. Where was Bakura during all this? Probably watching from some hidden place, trying to stop himself from crying too. I adore your fanfics.

*crying* that was so sad! Keep up the good work!... I miss Ryou!

This was... it was gorgeous. Even for all the saddness, you always seem to be able to make my heart beat harder with excitement and joy. It was wonderful. And I can't wait for that ancient Egypt fic! ~_

wow...

that is great!

i luv the idea of yugi's insecurity of wearing teh ring while he is with ryou. *nod nod* and also ryou's wish for yugi to juggle. snazzy. " and yeah! hehe long time no update! _

u really have made my day ocean! _ arigatou/thanks! keep up teh great ideas and writing!

Sad storie ;.; poor Ryou..

ooh...KEEP IT UP:-D YES! heehee! beautiful and fabulous.

I'm crying. That was so sad and moving!

sad ... so so sad. cant stop crying even though now i have an excuse to get out of watching joan of arcadia at least ... but it was very good in a very sad kinda way.

isis

That was really cute yet very very sad. T.T Ryou died. T.T What was he doing in that bad part of town anyways. So good! So did Yuugi propose to Atemu or something at the end? Me like! So cute!