really think about what dark is asking her...OH!speaking of dark...isn't it supposed to darsh/dark shnider,ohhhhhhhh, i get it (some times i just think i'm waaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyy to...vanity? nah,...)*spread this around* SOME ONE PWEEEEASE MAKE FAN FIC AN D (vampire hunter d) AND ARSHES!

THIS FIC IS VERY...GREATE!

hahahahahahaha I love it! hahahahaha

lol very cute and i don't think Dark would do that but what the hack u did great on it man keep up the good work

oh this was a cute giggle. And asking a woman to give up one of her chocolates! Yeah he deserved the slap.

That was the best! I laughed so hard.

haha awesome oneshot! u spelled everythin rite

:D keep on making more

Just wanted to stop by and say. Read your one-shot it was to funny I almost woke all my students reading it. Loved it!

Yes, you have the names spelled right. very amusing.

Oh my god, this is so cute! I can just see them!

Yoko? In a long skirt? Be ye daft?

uhhg i love bastard and i love this pairing and i wish there were more fics for the series!

heheh sexual innuendos in the form of chocolate.

oh my god so funny! hahaha.. that was so good and really interesting.

In the act of registering, I found out that someone else on this site uses tha pen-name 'Scan' so now you know it ain't me. Ah well. Funny fic, never seen the show, but your fic was nicely written. All the best ;)

*shnerk*

Okay, DS was out of character. I can't see him begging. On the other hand, you have created a funny, funny little story here, and I can see Yoko wearing the pants in that relationship. (Relatively speaking. I'm sure DS still rocks her world on a regular basis, wink wink nudge nudge.)

Your punctuation was a little iffy in a couple of places, but . . . hey, I'm not the Fiction Police. This was a hilarious little tale, and I look forward to seeing more of the same. If you wanted to expand on this scenario, you could say that Yoko's so cranky because she's pregnant- and then run away with that. ("But I cast the protection spell, Yoko! Honestly!" "AND WHAT? I'M THE ONE HAVING THIS BABY, YOU BASTARD, AND IF ITS FATHER DOESN'T SHUT HIS MOUTH HE WON'T HAVE ONE!" and so forth.)

hey a short story but really funny and humorous! keep up the good work! and i liked how you only revealed what dark schneider wanted towards the end. pretty comical reversal of expectations!