Sweet!

Yay! Hakkai x Yaone! There's my favorite pairing, and I love coming across fics about them.

I had fun reading this. I liked the image of Yaone tending to Hakkai, as well as he smiling because she's smiling as well.

However, I couldn't quite figue out what kind of situation/enviroment they're in; some hotel when their not fighting, the forest? Yaone and Hakkai are such private people that I can't see them being as intimate with each other as they were being if there was any chance of it being seen, so I'm a little confused about that.

Thanks for writing.

Wah! It's so good pls do make more when you have time thx and gudluk to you.

OH! I am so happy! A good Hakkai/Yaone fic! Wonderful work! *claps loudly* Oh please write more, this is excellent work!

hey great job! love the detail! great for a one-shot! hope to see more soon! bye

It's rare to see fanfics with pairings of Hakkai/Yaone...Another thing is the story's solemnity...detailed from head to toe and well-written...I actually love this fic.. :) you shouls create more..especially when you have free time... :D keep it up

Really good indeed!

-ShuRei

This was really nice. I felt kinda sad for Hakkai in the ending. But its still a really sweet story. Not to metion totally well written!

Ok, can I cry? That was so good. I don't see a lot of YaonexHakkai fics. I don't write them, because it seems everybody goes for the whole YaonexKougaiji thing. I really like YaonexHakkai better. (Shrugs) I guess I just think that they are cute together. You really are a good writer, so please write more. Yay for you!

Also, if you will, please check out my fic (The Heavens Are Hell). It's got a lot of humor and I'm a little down on reviews. Thanks for you time.

Happy Trails,

Yes yes, this is good.

Very well written. Hakkai and Yaone were cute together. Although you ended it on a positive note, I still felt a little sad for Hakkai. Good job!

Sorry I'm too lazy to sign in but Shia you rock my socks. Damn good one shot woman XD Psst... you must go read my new ficcie when I post it D