I have fallen in love with this story. I must admit all of this backstory and Rearranger stuff has been most enjoyable. your writing style is superb as well! :)

please, please update. where will you take these two? will Alicia consent to the experiment just to agitate Regal? how will this lovely coupple get back together, if ever? does Robert have a girlfriend? ;)

so many questions, so many words to write, so many chapters to read. please continue! :)

THE FACT THAT THIS FANFIC HAS NOT BEEN UPDATED MAKES ME /VERY/ SAD.

Oh dear. I've become addicted to a fiction that hasn't been updated in over a year. I do have one burning question, though. Regal asked to meet her in the kitchen, right? Why didn't she go and talk it all out there? One more thing, although just a suggestion. Your voice is wonderfully unique, as is your writing style, but details seem to be lacking. That maybe intentional, to keep things moving fast, but a paragraph about the scenary can be a good buffer so that the reader doesn't get lost and have to go back to make sure they didn't miss something. Please update!

I was completely dazzled by your fic. *Adds to favorites stat* Your portrayal of Alicia and Regal is insanely good. Just, wow. Their relationship is... real. So often I see them portrayed as a perfect love story etc. You bring their story to life. D

I was so happy to see you include a very realistic source of conflict to this story. Heh, when I first started reading, I couldn't remember Regal's age, so I looked it up again and my heart just sank (sometimes I think that the game creators wanted to include the tie between Regal and Presea, and they needed Alicia to be younger for the shock value without considering the implications P). Then you included this in your story and I relieved. You're handling it very well.

Moreover, the story itself is so addictive. Damn. You're writing a tragedy, but there's humor here too. Humor and silliness and amusing scenes between Alicia and Melissa (who is well incorporated.) At the same time, Alicia angsts about her torn apart family, having to leave them, never getting to see her sister... Man, I could ramble forever about how impressed I was, but I'm just going to say I hope you update soon and leave it at that. D

I've been reading for a long time and I'd just like to say I really like this story. To be honest I never felt any particular fondness for Regal, but after reading your story I found him much more interesting. Even made him my best buddy in my most recent ToS file. You've got a lot of skill.

Will you update? You do not know me but I know you very well, or at least your story... Your story actually maganed to bring a warm fuzzy feeling to my frozen and heartless body... well done...

Relationships? You don't need help with relationships! You're the proffesor! You have accurately and tactfully captured the essence of a young girl in love for the first time, that unrequited feeling when you lose it all, and the sadness that never seems to leave. You are amazing. Ali is amazing.

So, this review is going to be a little on the long side. Feel free to skip the boring parts.

I've always been really sick, so I never had a normal childhood or early teenage years. At twelve, while normal girls like Ali were falling in love for the first time and their world ended when it failed, I thought my world might end the very next day, and tomorrow might never come for me. I didn't have time to be normal. Now that I'm sixteen, I'm emotionally behind everyone else, and I've just gotten over my first crush (and it hurts a lot everytime I see him with another girl). I know that I would never have Ali's maturity to deal with it.

And Ali is so believably mature too! When I read this, I couldn't help but think about my own little sister (we're a year and a half apart, imagine that!) who has surpassed me into Ali's state of maturity. Katt (as everyone calls her) is my Melissa, she's got all the answers right when I need Them. It's totally pathetic since she's my LITTLE sister.

Ahem, what was I saying? Oh yeah, I was obssessively repeating how impressed I am by the way you capture the whole "girl in love" thing. It's a happy story with a tragic ending. We know how it ends, but you really...

Uh... I'll shut up now. I've wasted enough of your time.

Did I tell you how much I love the way you write the conversations between Melissa and Ali?

Okay, now I'm done.

~Lockea~

Good chapter. Can't think of much to say, but I did enjoy this. Glad to know you haven't stopped work on this story. ) Until next time, eh, mate?

Nice chapter. Not as meaty as some of the others, but it was still enjoyable. Once again, you portray the conflicting emotions very well. You're pulling off a very believable relationship here. (So yes, you have been doing far more than a decent job here.) :)

~Lemurian-Girl~

Wow.

I am amazed.

(is converted into a RegalxAlicia fan)

Before reading this, I disliked Regal and yes, thought he was a pedophile, but the idea of waiting for Alicia is so adorable. The way you twisted their story is fantastic.

And Melissa's personality is so loveable. D

Oh, please puh-lease please! update this. I see you've updated this year, so I'm hoping you will continue with this.

Blimey! Read the whole thing so far! Amazing! Absoltuely and utterly amazing, I love your writing. it's so vivid and alive and wow, wish I could write like this. I love how you've written regal too...I love him to bits. I have been in this situation-with the age difference and their limited time together-and you've really described how it felt.

Wonderful please continue

Aw, another sad ending for this chapter. But don't cry, Alicia! There can still be hope! :O

I just can't help but admire your writing in this story, though. Don't make us wait too long for the next chapter, please. :)

Darn, I kind of wanted him to kiss her, but at the same time, for the sake of the story, I'm glad he didn't. It gets so much more tragic with every chapter, because the inevitable is about to happen. I wonder what will finally persuade her to take the offer. Well, excellent chapter, and as always, you leave me wanting more.

~Lemurian-Girl~

Another cliffy! This is very good and I like the fact that your original characters come over as natural.

Nice. It's becoming a litte hard to handle, knowing what is going to happen to her soon, but I still love this. And once again you left us with a cliffy. Can't wait for the next update!

~Lemurian-Girl~