Nice story. I like it.

Please fix the spelling of Dubenko's name. Every time I come across "Dubanko" it's a glaring error that detracts from an otherwise enjoyable story.

OMG! She survived, yay! I love this story and can't wait to read more!

You wrote:

"I’m not going to let anything happen to you Lockhart I promise you that,"

Intentional or no, and even though as a Leland Orser/Dubenko fan I am extremely biased, that has got to be one of the saddest, sweetest things I have ever read. No joke.

Your grammar and punctuation need a lot of work, and your style could be improved, but you've got a gripping story and a great plot here. I'm even tempted to steal it and put my own spin on it. (If I ever do, I will most definitely give you full honors for the inspiration.)

j'adore

wow - i have just read this is story and it is really good. you had me in tears at some parts. please post more soon!

It jsut keeps getting better. You had me hooked from the start. Please keep going.

this is a great story you got going here. and as of now, there's no cliffhanger so there is no need for rushing but if you can, please update. I want to see a great ending to this!

You had a pretty decent, enjoyable story going until you got to this chapter. It's quite jarring for the reader to go from previous chapters of Abby's colleagues worried about whether or not she'll pull through (and Morris on what ought to be the guilt trip to end all guilt trips) to a chapter that amounts to nothing more than a dream sequence with a guardian angel-like being. E.R. is too realistic a series for something like this (read: cheesy) to ever happen in an episode.

i like it, it;s really cute, please update soon, like now, ok fine not now, but as soon as u can, thanks, and we didn't see anythign about luka or carter saying hi to abby

*sob sob cry cry* i can't believe it's over! it was awsome! i loved the story and .. i don't want it to be over! i LOVED reading and the update time was awsome. i know i've said all this b'fore but PLEASE make another story or sequel or something. this was a GREAT story and please continue writing, you're really great. good luck in school!

this was a good story. write a sequel.

wow,i was surpised you ended it like that,but i did enjoy the done

another really good chapter.

will she be able to walk? i hope she can. please update soon