Oh no! So cute tho, amazing story

I love your storyline. It is difficult to read with all of the misspellings and grammar errors, however.

A few Examples: Rap it to knock something with your knuckles. Wrap is to enfold someone or something with your arms or a cloak, etc.

Someone already mentioned flower vs flour in the last chapter.

I’ve also been thrown out of your stories when educated characters use “me and him” as the subject of a sentence. (He and I (or we) talked, not me and him talked.

I want to dive into your delightful plots and have the text disappear so I am experiencing the story as if I was there. Your stories are good enough for that, but your spelling and grammar keep jolting me out of the story. Please use a beta reader to catch these issues. Your story is worth it.

Your grammar and spelling may have been pretty abysmal in some areas BUT it was an entertaining read! Don't stop writing (and remember your capital letters)!

The story was good, but I hate the ending! I hope at lease Remus isn't such a wuss in this future!

While I am enjoying the story so far, something's bugging me: board flat piecd of wood. Bored not having anything to do. Sorry, it was just distracting.

nooooooooooo dont TT

Dang...That ending tho...

great story but the ending ruin it. but thank you from make this story! I always re read this! Can you make another ending with different from the real one, just for us, fans. Happy ending one, pleaseee

nooooo! too sad!

Damn that ending.

I'm really sad it ended the same way but thank you very much for writing!

Far, far more satisfying than the other story on with a similar premise. I like how clean your time travel was. No paradoxes - and you even managed to avoid the bootstrap paradox with this one! Loved how bittersweet it is. The last line hit me like a boulder. So terribly sad, but it also made so much sense. I'm glad Harry got to spend some time with Lily and James, even if their death was inevitable in the end. Bravo.

If Harry is five years old, how has he been at the Dursley's for six years? Obviously, that's not possible. He would have been there for four years since he was 15 months old when his parents died.

Last chapter is just stupid... Waste of time

I guess you can't beat fate and Sirius' plan to outsmart Voldemort just led to outsmarting himself. A shame about Marlene.