This chapter, so far, has been my absolute favorite. I can feel Raven's pain, strength, emotions, etc. Your writing style surpasses anything I have read on FF before, and I cannot wait to dive into the rest of it.

Reading stories like this remind me of how great Teen Titans is. I'd buy this book in a heartbeat if this was published. It's THAT good.

I loved it plz do a sequel

I love every minute of this story why you didn't have a sequel

Love it :D

I love your writing style. Even with no plot or structure, the content of your writing would be beautiful.
I usually cannot stand romance, but this works for me, for now. I prefer no nonsense romance rather than ooey-gooey crap.

There were some typos, maybe? Your story was a little confusing, just like you said.

I very much like the mystery element in this story. Starfire's parents have not been revealed. I would actually be surprised if they were super strict and not understanding, fun hating parents. That would be cool. The villains are also mysterious. I suppose it is this way because they are your characters (as far as I know). I really hope that they are good characters, or at least presented in a good way.

I like the action. I do not know much about Batman, so I do not know if he was written well, but to have Batman in this story is nice at worst and thrilling at best. This opens up so many possibilities for Robin's character, and I would like to see what direction you will take with that.

All of the characters are written well. If there is one thing that I cannot stand, it is a character that is out-of-character. Good job.

I cannot say much about the pacing just yet, but I think I have read another story of yours. If I remember correctly, the pacing and format of that story and this one were very similar.

Overall, this chapter is a nice introduction to what looks like a massive story. I just looked at the titles of the chapters, and I am getting so excited. Well done.

Brilliant, well done, beautiful plot line, nuff said. Keep on writing and great job! God bless you.

I take it this was made before Season 5 of Teen Titans. According to the TV series, Starfire was making a mess of Jump City, Robin had just moved from Gotham, Cyborg was dealing with the change from human to 1/4 human, Beast Boy had just left the Doom Patrol, and Raven had probably just left Azerath. During Starfires rampage, she kissed Robin, and then threatened them, but then they all joined as a team after beating back aliens that kidnapped Starfire

technically, It isnt Trigon in Ravens mind, its the emotional core Rage

GASP! WHAT IF MYAND'R IS BEHIND ALL THIS AND EVERYTHING THATS BEEN GOING ON IS A PART OF THE TRIALS?! CONSPIRACY!

damn, that was one hell of an adventure! I had fun the entire way. Such a long way since the first chapter, all the twists and turns, this is an AMAZING novel. Most definitely one of the top ten of my favorite fanfictions ever. I'm glad you kept Raven in character! most stories with BBRae tend to make Raven OOC.

And the way the focus was spread on all the characters, not just revolving around one or two.

Overall, this is a masterpiece

Wow! I started going through the WHOLE Teen Titans archive BACKWARDS and stumbled upon this lengthy jewel. Hehe, kinda excited to continue reading it!

Why do I get the feeling that I'm going to hate Shady, and that he's working for SLade?

just start reading it

and i already love it

keep writing your great

Boom. Perfect spot to go to bed.

Yay, yay, yay!

Yay 1: Starfire/Robin fluff

Yay 2: Slade is dead

Yay 3: BIG BOOM!

...and something about Trigon, can't remember what though.

Well, it looks like the Titans are going to have to start a new play, because this HAD to be act 3.

Can't wait to figure out what it is.

I have to say, this is VERY good. I liked what you tied in at the end there, and I am very glad I didn't let the lack of a summary phase me.

Moving on!