Brilliant. You are a clever and talented writer.

Loved it, loved it, loved it. It's rare, finding a fic that acknowledges the fucked up three-way these guys have going, and even rarer to find one that does it well - this fic is one of the rarer ones.

That was pretty good! I especially liked the disordered timeline of the sections - the way things were presented helped heighten the dramatic tension, and let the most important thing - Tsuzuki's decision - happen at the end. Also kudos on treating Hisoka's serious intamicy issues in a realistic context. Of course he's not going to accept Tsuzuki's feelings, not right away. But someday, who knows?

I think I've read this story 7 or 8 times, but never reviewed. So, I just wanted to take the time to commend you on a well written story. At first, I didn't think your choice of scene layout would play, but it worked out perfectly! Thanks for sharing and for the insight into Tsuzuki's character. Great job!

'Ko

That was an excellent story. The fact that it was out of order added to the story in my opinion.

This is one of the best YnM fics that I have ever read, and not /that/ green too. Great job! I hope it'll have a sequel, ne? 3

That was a nice job! I liked how you made it in that order. It was fun trying to follow along with the plot. :]hmm.. although... i wonder what would have happened if tsuzuki HAD taken the "offer?"

It's quite possible to now say that I have found the most unique story ever on I love the way you jumbled everything up, it made for more creative reading. I definitely thought Tsuzuki was going to accept before I cursed myself and slapped my face. Haha.

So cute! I am so glad he didn't take the offer, really well written, by the way. I personally don't like the Muraki/Tsuzuki or Muraki/Hisoka unless it is rape or something, but anyway, enough of that! Good story!

I love it! Especially the way it is set up & the story & dialogue were excellent.

I found this story quite excellent. I shall be keeping tas on this, due to it's supreme awesomeness and lack of flaws

Oh wow. That was tres magnifique! Bravo! Wow I really liked it. How come you don't have that many reviews? You're excellent! Wow, that was a really well-done story (even though it wasn't in order). ; but thats ok, it added to it alot, I must say. _ Good job! Please keep writing, I really think you have a great talent! And good luck with your English major! X.x;

-TBWKA

I absolutely love this story! Definately going on my favourites list... It's well written and the way you've put it out of order is really unique. I like the way it makes it more suspenseful. And I'm really glad Hisoka got Tsuzuki his cookie, so cute! _

this was a very interesting fic, despite not sticking with the pairing i like... but then again, i wasn't necessarily expecting it to

Very nice work. I love how it's not in order- that just makes it more interesting.

I'm adding this to my favorite stories list.