Go ahead and make a sequel it is a good story having ash and misty turn to pokemon at nighttime. And turn back into humans as good idea and having lingua be a uncle

Oh that commercial scene was absolutely hilarious!

This was a very interesting story. One of the few stories that caused me to think.

I love how each of the kits are slowly taking the limelight. It's good that you focused on each of the kits; I especially like Sparky and his Umbreon habots. Pikachu is right, he might become an Umbreon someday. :) And LO to Ember speaking English. He's like Meowth! :D

I bet it was difficult for them to experience being pokemon and when Ash had a pokemon's view of the trainer concept made me sad. It made him realize that this wouldn't have been fair to all the pokemon that had been caught. And aww he had to let Blossom/Crystal go.

I really like the concept of the story. It kind of lacked the surprise factor, because Ash and Misty immediately said that the kits were theirs, but that's okay because it's still good. And look there! Misty's parent's! Ain't that nice! :D 3

Sequel please love u r storey

holly crap

say? is there a sequal yet? pm me if there is

I love a sequel! You could make longer to that would cool!

MORE! MORE MORE MORE MORE MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR
*skreeeee*

kawaii

Sequel please!

I LOVE THIS STORY! I love how you gave them the ability to switch from human to Pokemon and the plot twist wher Ash's dad was the crazy ninetails! It's absolutely perfect in every way and all of the little eevee's are so cute! I would love if there was a sequal to this amazingly cute story and this is the longest review I have ever written! YOU MAY BE FREE TO FEEL HONORED (( you don't have to X3 ))

You should make a sequel

please made an epilogue