I loved Kyo's thinking at the end of this chapter. Haha go go Kyo!

I think my main issue with this is the hang up of transportation. No one knows how to make a boat after five years of anarchy? Hell, humans are naturally good enough at physics that they know when something floats. Yeah, I know boats are manufactured by heavy machinery and industry, and that isn't an option at this point anymore. However, I find it very unlikely that transportation would be shelled in favor of weaponry. Historically, wars are fought not with weapons, but with transportation. Especially a navy and blockades.

Maybe I'm not understanding correctly. Maybe it's because I come from a military family, (specifically a navy branch) and this is like shattering the fourth wall for me. But the way it sounds like, is that there is a large body of water dividing the zodiacs and the humans. This is assuming all rational thought was thrown out the window and absolute anarchy took hold before a monarchy was able to establish it's grounds. All in five years? A rise and fall of an era in just five years?

Sorry, I don't mean to harp on this. It just jerked me really hard out of the story and I couldn't suspend my disbelief. I would say that the premise of the story is interesting, and I may be getting hung up on a point that is extremely trivial in the grand scheme of things.

However, that is something that just can't be put away lightly. This is people's livelihoods, an entire military branch, and some people just live their lives on boats. It would be more compelling if you gave ve a reason besides hate. Perhaps there is something in the water that both sides blame the other for. That would give adequate reason to keep them both hating one another, keep everything out of he he water, and explain why everything goes to hell so quickly.

Again, may be harping. But it's something to think about as you continue to write in other stories. That is a very heavy bomb you dropped right at the beginning and it has me flailing around wondering how it was even possible.

Sorry. I do want to see how everything continues though
Best.

you do know that nearly every sentence after someone's speaks it's likes kyo mumbled stupidly, kyo asked stupidly and kyo shouted stupidly why dose stupidly always come up

:D great story!

I knew that Tohru was a half blooded zodiac I just knew it! D Great chapter it was amazing

why didn't kyo transform? I have an idea but still. Can't wait to read the next chapter! This chapter was amazing I loved it

loved this chapter it was great! I'm so happy that tohry finally stood up for herself.

loved this chapter it was amazing!

Oh Tohru was bad in this chapter.I loved that kyo got jelous it was so cute!D

Marriadge! I can't wait to see what happens next. D

OMG! Is tohru whi I think she is! I guess I'll just have to wait and see. Anyways awesome chapter I loved it :)

great chapter

awesome chapter I loved it :)

I want to know about that bracelet! Awesome chapter you did a great job on it D

Kyo to the rescue! What is that bracelet about anyways? I must know! anyways great chapter D