I love it. I think that you should other knight's perspective of Arthur and Lancelot. I enjoyed this fanfiction.

wow this was intense and insightful...you are a brillany writer and have written the knights all very well.

That was so beautiful. Definately one of my favourites.

So much happiness, I can hardly express it. Awesome.

This is truly beautiful, insightful and sad and sweet... Very well written. My compliments!

I'm surprised that this is your first KA fic. It's very good. Well written, emotive and makes perfect sense (Very few of the fics I've read recently do so this is a big deal for me at the moment, sorry). I enjoyed it greatly.

um cool, but the thing he had been watching for was a little unclear. was it one comforting the other, arthur caring for lancelot while he cried, something no one ele ever saw, but they almost new unconsciensly.

That was really lovely. I think that the sideline view we got from Gawain was really effective and even though it was only a one-shot, you could see that all of the characters' personalties were right.

Wonderful story and I hope to see more soon!

Oh. That is *so* lovely. I love how subtle it is; very true to the movie, it's wonderfully slashy without having to bash you over the head with the fact. I love the relationships, the mention of the fallen knights, and your characterizations are dead on. )

This story is very good, I lvoe it. It's...there are no words to adequetly describe it, and thats no joke. It touches on various topics but somehome maintinas one overall focus. You got the characters pegged perfectly, think you could do a follow up? And I am kinda curious what IS it that Gawain realizes is between Arthur and Lancelot? I dont get that part, probably should, but dont. Think you could fill me in? Maybe? Anyways, great fanfic!

that was beautiful

If this is a non-slash story this was great. I like how the deep friendship between Lancelot and Arthur is explained.

A beauty, truly it is, Please write more. You have a good eye for detail and for rendering emotions. Great work! C.

Wow, just wow. So powerfully written. Just beautiful. Thank you for writing that. Wow.

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Well done and keep up the good work.