oh so cute! love it

I liked this story. Humour was good, but even without the humour, this would have been a great story. To sum it all up in one word.

Kurtty.

I'm glad Lance was treated like crap, and I always knew Amanda was just using Kurt for her own good.

After this story, Kitty probably got to know Little Kurt a bit more. ;D

M, yeah. I kinda figured you were a guy...but I've also made the mistake of pegging a girl as a guy too. That was a SCARY experience.

This was funny and...a little gross, yea? If your computer ever gets any better, I have a suggestion for you, though. Put all thoughts in Italics font. And make the formatting of the first few chapters look like what you had on the last chapter. Much easier to read.

M, sorry, my reviews tend to be very technical and "good writing" oriented...like the site says they're supposed to be...

Boring is me, I know.

...on to sequel...

not a bad little shorty. THANKS!

much better format on this chapter. good so far. THANKS!

Hey Dude, nice story! I must say though, you need to watch the spelling and grammar (unless of course it was done intentionally). I can't wait to see what else you post!

Dan (A.K.A. Geyegeroffe)

That was awesome. Man those two can kick ass! Lol. Kurt is so adorable, I love him.

BEAMER! ha ha *Laughs at kurt* achem neway good story!

Nice Chapter!:)

No, not really. But I do like your story. And yeah, I like Lance, but I must admit he was an asshole...and Amanda a bitch. So, I hope they get what's coming to them. Update soon!

Nice story you got there!

Although I'm a big Lance/Kitty supporter (have you read anything from the Red Witch? Because aside from being brilliant, she makes it very clear that he would never be mean to Kitty on purpose, since he is a total love sick idiot! ... well that is how she sees him and since I like him I agree;P) ... so where was I going with this, oh yeah I support Kitty and Lance but the way you told your story he is a big jerk and Kitty would be much better off with Kurt.

Did you get that? If not don't worry. Short version I liked your story!:)

Nice story so far...hope you keep it going.

Well it's nice to see another Canadian but I have to say you need to fix up how this looks. I mean whatever formate your using to write this on isn't a good thing to use.

The words end halfway through the screen and there are no spaces for paragraghs. Acctually it looks more like on giant run on paragraph to be honest.

Also you only have one person speakind in a pharagraph, if you have another person talking then hit the return(enter) key.

It's abit short, but this IS your first try, so try to keep this in mind in the future and I'm sure things will improve.

But it's a nice little start.

good story. cant wait 4 the next chap!

Ya know... there is a REASON why I hate Lance to the bones. And reading stories like this reminds me on how much I want to separate his head from his body.

I feel so bad for Kitty. Such a terrible end for a date. But she found the perfect person to stay with for the rest of the night. Who can better support her with comfort and protection than Kurt?

This chap was short. Next time, I would suggest that ya fill in more details and emotions. The details is what makes the story. But I like this one and will be watching this. If ya need a beta-reader, I can see if I can be of any help.

And welcome to FanFiction. I'll put ya on author alert so I'll know when ya update. I want to see more of this.

Peace out.

Darky.