no i love this story what was wrong with it! NO well you got to do what you got to do~ good luck

I LOVE UR STORY TO DEATH! Ur taste in music and dress are good ;) hopefully u will update again soon! :)

I really like this story, and really want you to continue!

*dies*

That was awesome!Update soon, please.

hi there!

ok. i'm finally free to read this story...although i have class in 23 mins.

but here we go

it was the last of his worries - maybe it could be 'least' instead of 'last' ?

i'm already thinking this is much more improved than the last chapters you've written. there's definitely more description and action rather than just dialogue which is great to see.

“Here take a seat, I’ll be right back…” - maybe you could do a comma after 'Here' or something?

“Well you went out of your way to come here, so tell me what’s wrong commanded Darien. - after 'wrong' put a comma and close talking marks. so...'so tell me what's wrong," commanded Darien.

I’m worn out and all I could concentrate was going to bed!” - concentrate on was

how we never hanged out! - hung out not hanged...i think

hmm...i think it's a bit cheesy of darien to recite the song lyrics...can't imagine him doing it s

but yeah! GREAT work! i loved what you've done here. there's more depth and emotion and everything! you keep writing like this and this story will be awesome!

good job!

NiteAngel

;Þ

i love this chapter besides the song selectons

Wow ... I'm so amazed. Why? Because this is simply just wonderful to read. I love it! Reminds me of the times when I was that young and a freshman and a sophomore. Ah, sigh. Simply great chapters and I loved reading all of it from the beginning. Hope you update soon!:D

aww, that was really good, and really sad.

but i love how you made the characters still friends, instead of having Tessa ran away and things being tense between them.

keep up the good work.

*Katie :)

LOVE THE STORY! PLZ UPDATE REALLY, REALLY SOON!

omg i cant wait till the next chapter!1 this just got good

Nice chapter!

Update soon.

wow, i can't wait to read what is next going to happen, please update soon

wow. intense. i love it. please continue soon!

Lol, your story is too cute! I love it! Good luck on your next chapter and God Bless!

Aw... YAY, they're finally getting closer... but everything is still so hard for them... with Liking Serena.. and taker her to the dance... and darien haivng trust issues! hahaah... but it was a good chapter! cant wait to read more.

*Katie :)