really good fanfic, just read the whole way through it super confused at the random start and the not explaining things, just realized this was a sequel

Very nice story! Can't believe Harry will not try something to save his mother at one point in the future though :)

This chapter (15) just might be my favorite chapter ever, it’s so well written and full of good jokes and just all in all so satisfying. You are a fantastic writer, it takes one to be able to have meow be such a funny line.

The climax was written so beautifully, it brought tears to my eyes. Loved the whole thing!

what a ride! enjoyed it so much and couldn't put it down for a second. thank you so much!

I liked the plot and that Draco and Snape were helping. It was hard to keep up with the constant turmoil, only magical healing could have restored so many and it really pointed out the nonsensical oddities for plans that Dumbledore propagated that exist in JKR's canon. Hard to believe something was that long ago and still so much fun today. Good stories!

Despite a few bothersome issues a couple chapters back, this was a really strong ending. Very satisfying from the moment Harry was separated from his friends and faced Malfoy Senior. Loved his demise! Loved the Snape reveal and all that followed. Pulling a cauldron out seemed a tad of a stretch in credibility since it was only luck that the death eaters had been distracted away from the arena. Otherwise Snape would certainly not been able to fend off attack and produce the potion. The actual falling away of Voldys body parts was really funny and strangely believable. Hilarious that his jaw fell off denying him the ability to utter a curse. It was a great ending for him as he was so aware of what was happening to him. Always good to see him get his just desserts. After he died though, his small part soul rebelled big time inside Harry trying to hurt Harry, but it was never resolved as to what happened to it. Still there or did it die?

Although I am certainly enjoying the writing, I am disappointed with the continued overuse of polyjuice, port keys and poison. Once or twice, ok, but this is getting ridiculous. What happened to the signals? Since polyjuice has been used so often, why don't they use some detecting spell or something. It's overdone. New more creative attacks plz.

That was tilting towards unbelievability. Love potions are so common, things silly girls use and antidotes therefore easily available. It doesn't feel like a viable solution even though it may add drama to the love story, but stretches credibility too far to enjoy. It also sadly taints Harry and Ginny's first kiss and developing relationship. Plus why would Pansy blow it by showing everyone in the Great Hall? She had him and could have controlled him in secret, made him sneak out to meet her. The whole scenario seems kind of dumb with no real point.

Okay

I love your writing in this story! You'really dialogue and writing fits the characters Rawlings created perfectly. You have made both tear up at times and laugh out loud so much that my daughter wanted to read the page. Thank you for your wonderful twist on the Harry Potter cannon.

Alright you got me with the "Dobby will go wherever Harry Potter goes."

Brilliant idea.

Hey! Did you realize that the list of tortures Harry described were in alphabetic order? Just a funny thought! Great story! Thanks!

Really Good! Just one thing about the marriage proposal... you do remember Ginny is in her fifth year, which means she is fifteen or sixteen?

Well if Goyle is dead, was Dumbles lying about him being under lock and key and 'safe'
Interesting.. So Goyle was 'Greed' and Pansy was 'Lust.' so I just need to figure out the rest.. Zambini is probably anger, hmmm
Thanks
Tricia