oh my god! i read this so long ago and then for some reason i forgot about it! it's a bautiful story, like a lot of your others. you are a wonderful writer.

Brava Brava Bravissima! I love what u did to him!

Soon? .You're a month and a half shy of a . Can somebody get me a dictionary?I think this woman has forgotten the meaning of 'soon'. FOR CRYING OUT LOUD,UPDATE!

's on automatic choke-or-hang-the-guy,isn't he?Ouch. Once again,you might wanna change Erik to Stephen.

My older brother went to see the Broadway production of Phantom of The to that,the Phantom's name is have quite a predicament here now,don't we?I suggest you go back and fix that before a flamer that listens very closely to Broadway comes to get don't HAVE to,but...you might wanna.

thats a good story Marcel was telling. please update soon! i really like ur story!

wow. me likey very much. the serial killer thing was GOOD!

o. i like this. will read on

Oh wow, this is really good (yes, it's me again...). I hope you continue this one again...I jsut recently got into Phantom...gotta love those scarred guys, though, right? (You know, Zuko, Phantom...and well Harry Potter's got a scar too, but I don't think that really counts...) Ah, this is great. Keep writing!

-Jaqq

As much as I hate waiting, this continues to be very good. I just like the way you write it, and the plot, and the characters (especially your originals).

There are a few goofs in the first few sentences... "sing" instead of "sting" in the first, and in the second the pronouns got a little mixed up so you accidently referred to Jaimie as "him". No biggie though. ;)

Can't wait for the next chapter!

This is a really good story. But I can't help but see that you have not updated it in a very long time. Will you add more if I ask you very nicely?

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E! I'm so sorry that it took so long for me to review. My computer died and there will be no reviving it. *sob*

Thanks for thanking me! I loved this chapter and I still want to hug poor Erik. Update soon!

I really like your characterization of Erik. It's well-considered, and his thought process in the Erik-POV parts seems just like him. Hope he can gain Jamie and Marcel's trust after this little incident. :)

p.s. I'm absurdly glad yo decided to shoot him in the leg. He gets shot in the shoulder in so many other fic, the change is nice.

one criticsm: try not to use the word 'random.' It just doesn't do justice to whatever you're describing.

Oh wow, this is one of the only phan fics that I think is really good. I'm looking forward to reading moe of it! Keep it up, please!

I personally think this story is absolutely fabulous. I do like the way you went with this chapter, and I look forward to the next one. :) I'm afraid I don't have any suggestions for you though. ;) Wonderful work here.