Whoa. Whoa. Amazing. I love it, I mean this is just incredible. I'm babbling, sorry. (I LOVE American McGee's Alice). Keep writing!

I love this! Really interestingly written. A!

wow... this is REALLY good. and... detailed. now i feel all insignifigant. i'm such a bad author! this WAS really good though.

Kill'em all and let the Khorne sort'em out!

The way you write is absolutely wonderful. Every character is very well tought. Absolutely brilliant!

This is a wonderfully told story. Your style is gorgeous, and I find myself wishing for more of it. Delightfully creepy and dark. You have talent, and I hope you write more.

Along the garden path...to go fowards, you must go backwards...

I have only two words to say. Otherworldly phantasmagoria. And that's just a complex way of saying: ethereal, dreamlike, dark, unnerving... In short, perfect.

This story was extremely well thought out. The details of everything were so well that it was like you could see and hear what was going on. I hope there are more chapters coming soon to add to this story.

I am, indeed, the Artist Formerly Known As Snark v2.0 Formerly Known as Snark.

Hmm... is this a one-shot? I hope not. Very, very good and surreal and all that nice crap. Fascinating stuff.

Are you Snark? Isn't this Snark's story?

Anyway, the addition was great, and I'm waiting to see what happens next.

That was AMAZING. In a twisted, strange, evil diabolical way, it was BEAUTIFUL.