I love this! Thank you so much!

I know its been years since you published this story but I just read it and loved it! Do you have any others?

Love it

This is one of the most beautiful and romantic stories I have ever read!I especially loved how it was structured,e/o relationship wasn't rushed.I love how you kept them in chapter twelve,I was very pleased with how you wrote the discussion between Elliot and Kathy.I believe that if it had come down to a divorce on the show,this is probably how they would have did a great job showing that they both grew apart,but at the end of the day,they realized they would continue to love each other,that is how it should be,Not only because of the kids,but they have history it!E/O FOREVERRRRRRRR!

this story was really great liked it alot. Is there going to be a squeal.

This was very cute. I liked.

Also loved how you went full circle with the sneeze at the end. Clever. Nice job :)

WOW!This story is so sweet!Just beautiful!Seriously?I never thought that getting Influenza could turn out to be so romantic!I truly love how you set up the whole getting together,and getting to know each other between Elliot and Olivia.I wish this had happen for them on the show,especially for Olivia,she truly deserve a life like this,a happy ending!To bad Stabler is gone!I still have hope for them though!Have you notice there is absolutely no chemistry between her and the Hayden guy on season 13?The relationship is not believable at all!He seem to be a cool guy,but sorry David,Liv is in love with our boy!Stabler!Even though Elliot is absent from the show,you still get the vibe,like he is watching over her or something!We can only hope and dream that he will be back for his Liv!E/O FOREVER!ALWAYS!

i love this story so far

Awwww! Love it!

Not to criticize your french, but when she was introducing herself, she should have said Je m'appelle Caroline, and not, Je suis Caroline. Using Je Suis makes her, to anyone who can speak french, look like a fraud, just FYI. But besides that, love the story.

The more angst the better? No. Only up to a point, a little angst is good, too much angst is simply too much.

For example...

remember when you were a kid and your older sibling or cousin or uncle or someone bigger than you took your favorite toy and held it just out of your reach? Remember how they would almost let you reach it, then kept pulling it away, making you jump, and jump, and jump, and jump... all while laughing at you? Remember how after a while you didn't even want the toy any more and you walked away, but never ever forgot the teasing, torment, or the hurt feelings?

Well, some writers cross the line with the angst to the point where I have actually said to myself while reading, "Geeze, just kill them and be done with it, put them out of their misery"

You haven't crossed that line, ever, that I know of, but I just didn't want you to go on believing "The more angst the better"... No, not always.

Anyway, I am loving this story.

~Pix~

i thought the story was really well written and very enjoyable. i like the ending though.

i loved this story but i guess it would be too much to ask you to write something similar for CI? i would love to see alex take care of bobby when he's sick.

love this story this is mabe my 4th time reading this i will read the rest later

Love It! I had the flu in 3rd grade, I'm in 10th now, but I was out of school for a Week! It got so bad at one point that I didn't even remember waking up to take my medicine.