An ok read but while its a cool premise and parts were interesting it feels disjointed as you read it. Like a series of one shots around a common idea then a whole single story.

Great job on this story!

Wonderful you have illustrated a world in greater depth, in a engulfing way. That government i would gladly burn. making somebody less than a slave is unforgivable

I highly approve your story Xander is bad-ass and wicked cool. Those are two words I never thought I'd put in the same sentence as 'Xander'...

Hehehe lol they saw him dust two vampires and now they think he has mutant powers!

...poor Xander.

Just found this story. What a great find. What an Author. Well done. Off to read the next in the series.

Xander was a well written characterisation. Enjoyed the other characters too

so he has a mental safe house in his head with two guard dogs?

so much for having no powers...

update! :D

i love it

coolness

Right... The story was great, but the ending was a little rushed. I mean, that's it? What happens next? After all that trouble, they're not even gonna try to capture the escapies. Can we say international incident as soon as those people start going public with their auswich like tale? The X-world isn't THAT racist.

Piling up the cudo's for never giving Xander a power though...

Dumm dum dum! Nice ending! Great story overall!

So, Sinister was not the ultimate authority for this base. And I see a connection between this story and the second X-Men movie as well. Thanks for finishing this tale.

Very well done!

good chapter, wonders where xander will go, enjoyed the chapter, awaits another, byes

O neat. You brought it right back to X-men movie cannon. Will we be seeing more of wolverine? I hope so. As always, I'm looking forward to more. I like that you threw in a GenerationX character for the heck of it. I loved reading that as a kid.