I like it!

Good fic. I liked it. Maybe I missed it but what happened to the house? It was burned? Or was it destroyed some other way.

First person POV is good, but I think the usage of 'you' refers more to the reader, not Sasuke unless it's more of a letter than a conversation.

I'd like to see more of what Sakura is thinking, too. It seems weird that Sasuke would actually be upset about the house being destroyed too (I won't spoil the anime/manga for you, but it's stuff that happens recently).

Like I said, looks good. Great start. I would like to see this lengthen into a full story ratehr than a one-shot.

I loved it! it's- it's- it's- I'm at a loss for words! lol- keep up the fantastic work!