Good start! I like that Surius escaped and now is adopted by Harrys family.

It's a shame you couldn't finish this one. It's a good story idea.

Oh you must come back and finish this!
Rock on

There’s an excellent name for a rock band: Penguins Hailing Hermione.
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Thank you. That was my reasoning too. “You cannot bring your broom to school” doesn’t translate into “you can’t use school equipment to play sport here”. Bringing your own bat was forbidden at my elementary school, but it stopped exactly nobody from playing baseball.
Great story.
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Quidditch has 2 d’s. Peer are those kids in school with you; pier is that wood partial bridge at the lake.
Good story
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I spelled beet and fleas in my last review and they didn’t take.
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D Y E changes colors. is the vegetable you’re thinking of. plague dogs.
Good story though
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BTW it's spelt caput draconis

uh oh... Well for peter ;)

The story's okay, I guess. I didn't particularly like the flow of the story. Some occurrences were half-assed and had contradicted logic. For example, I couldn't quite imagine Sirius not being able to barely last Azkaban for a couple of weeks when he had spent over ten years there previously. Another is when the jury's verdict is not on the favor of Harry's. Was it not illegal to have the accused drink a dose of Veritaserum? This would highly increase the credibility of Sirius, and would save him (and Harry alike) humiliation and embarrassment. But in the case that the potion was not allowed in the jurisdiction, why was Harry given a dose against his will?

There are also quite a handful of grammatical mistakes that hadn't escaped my notice. I couldn't help but be irritated with your misuse of 'piers'. You'd often confused this term with 'peers'. But I'm guessing you've already realized this error because you'd finally corrected the use of 'peers' by the latter chapters.

What annoyed my eyes more were the pesky author's notes (or comments rather) that you seemed so fond of putting everywhere you liked. They just ruined the story, to be honest.

Harry's a bit... off. He's a bully himself, I believe. His character and actions made me feel as if he deserved every problem strung his way. I mean really, the things he and the other pranksters kept on doing to Snape was not justifiable.

To be fair though, your creative disclaimers had kept me entertained. :)

Keep on writing!

Cheers,
Yesterday's Secrets

With the amount of reviews I know this is gonna be awesome so I can't wait to read the rest of it.

This story is just so cool. I have literally just spent about 1 hour reading it. I read some other reviews but to be honest I didn't notice any of the (bad) things they mentioned. S'pose that's good :D So yes, please update soon, although it has been a bit longer that 6 months :P try 4 years 10 months XD

great chap plz update soon

update soon