Nooooooooo, I'm absolutely gutted this wasn't tied up. Your banter was electric! Hands down, this is the best Axel / Kairi fic I've read. Any way you could find it in your heart to update?

It's been over a year. I hope nothing bad has happened to you and that you are well! It's still a great story, and I wonder where it's going to go - if ever continued.

Yes! Hurray for updates! Love this story. It actually got me in Kairi/Axel. Shame there aren't many out there, but of them all this is my favourite. This chapter does advance the story quite a bit, both in plot and pairing. Kairi and Axel seem to be progressing certainly, and he seems to be realising he actually likes her company. There also seems less animosity between them (though it's still there) which, as entertaining as there barbs towards each other are, is exciting for its connotations towards their relationship, unsteady as it is. Already said this, but I love your work and style. You're definitely my favourite Kingdom Hearts writer, and it was great to see so many updates. It's like a Christmas present of literature, the best present there is! Thankyou for your brilliant contributions to fanficnet, and for proving there is genuinely amazing fanfic out there. You write like a complete pro. I look forward to reading more of your work, this story in particular. Axel has got to be my favourite character, and it's nice to see a Kairi with backbone, even if she does somewhat fail in practice and become a hindrance, mores the pity for Axel and the amusement for me.

I'm usually a hardcore axel/roxas shipper. But, I really like this! It's entertaining and so well written! Can't wait for an update!

Dude. This chapter 3
Keep at it, please! I want to see where their relationship is headed. Kairi as Namine? ._. This is going to be very interesting indeed...

This story really is worth the wait, good chapter and I hope you update soon:D

"So I should shower with Samantha, then."
Lol I think I just died from laughing so hard, great chapter. _

Oh my goodness, you updated! YAY! I really like this chapter as there is nice progression and, as always, I think the dialogue is perfect. You have them talking and it's very... 'real' is the only word I can think to describe it right now. You have them conversing like real people would. It's great! I like Axel's inner struggle and Kairi's too. A good character is one you can relate to. The way you write them allows just that.
Thank you again for continuing! Please update when you can. :)

Well. I'm happy to know Axel and I share the same exquisite taste in liquid soap.
I'm SO HAPPY you updated. Oh my goodness. It been a long while! I have dearly missed your amazing word-smithing and I can't wait for more!
C.D.M.

Let me say that I am so happy you updated. I was sure this story had been abandoned, so seeing it updated just made my day. I hope you are feeling well and that life is treating you well.
Now onto the review: I have read this story over and over again; I enjoy your writing that much. The banter is perfect, the way you characterized Kairi and Axel is perfect. Everything about this fic is just great! I can reread this many times and still laugh at Kairi and Axel's interactions. I'm very interested to see where this story is going.
I hope you get your muse back and that you update soon. If not, this story is still worth a reread. Enough said.

PLEASE CONTINUE... you're amazing

very gd i cant wait 2 read more

I'm so happy you're back! I actually welled up with silly little tears when I found out. :)

C.D.M.

"The floor is not a flattering position, trust me."

"Hun, I've been in many positions. And you could make any one of them flattering."

I blinked.

"I don't – "

" – get it, I know."
Best part of their banter - Loved it!

Thank you thank you thank you! I'm so glad you've continued. I think the witty arguments are as good as they've always been, and I absolutely loved this chapter! It was a very good come-back read! I can't wait for the next update :D

I LOVE YOU! Sorry, just really happy this was updated. I think the banter was just as good as before.