Very, very good. Creative, expressive...and left me speechless. Great.

Kit

ERIN! OMG! this is an excellent poem! Encore, Encore!

I love it!¡!¡!¡!¡!¡!

~Caitlin _

Wow.. This is so..beautiful. I love the way you use your words. :( so sad it is...but written so well.

Aw, that was such a sad poem! - great rhyming, you've done great with vocab in there... D Kroenen rocks, I hope you write more soon!