Reviews for Book one: Start in a new life
Guest chapter 41 . 11/26/2019
Update please?
drainednerves chapter 2 . 10/22/2019
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jmw03u chapter 41 . 10/15/2019
I love the kiosk! I just worry that if it is mainly food based there might be some conflict because food is a part of tuition. But I bet the elves could make lots of stuff that isn't necessarily based on food. Or if you wanted to do food, maybe food that is extra special in somewaysomething that the elves wouldn't necessarily make one for every person in the castle for lunch or anything but that the students could buy.

Lol, I totally thought that you were going to have them make extra biscuits and stuff to sell to the Three BroomsticksBy the way, I absolutely love your story! I am having so much fun reading it. Thank you for writing this.
jmw03u chapter 40 . 10/15/2019
Definitely 1 or 2! More helping house elves! Whoot!
jmw03u chapter 37 . 10/15/2019
Oh my gosh! I absolutely love this chapter! It is my absolute favorite! Harry brewing healing potions for the house elves.I love it!
the real narnia chapter 41 . 10/4/2019
wow. I really love this. I'd also love to see Harry become and animagusmaybe a tiny kittenand to follow mcgonagall around. I really like the healing aspect, and there is reference in snakes with healing, like with the caduceus and I'd love to see Harry use parselmagic to heal.

I also really love Harry and the twins relationship. I love how in the books he gave the triwiz money to them for their shop. And I was upset they didn't have that in the films. it's like they've adopted him as a brother, and it's adorable.
I also love what you're doing about house elves i think it's very interesting and super sweet of Harry
I know it's been awhile since you last updated but I hope you decide to continue this and update soon. I really can't wait to read the next chapter. Happy writing
csheila chapter 27 . 9/4/2019
Very nicely done for both characters
LAB1 chapter 41 . 5/29/2019
I've really enjoyed your alternative canon story! The beginning was a bit graphic for me, but the rest has been great!
Smullies chapter 7 . 5/17/2019
Keep it up
tsubasaiscool chapter 41 . 11/4/2018
Please update soon
storp930 chapter 41 . 11/2/2018
Wow this is among one of the most detaild stores that ddi not bore me I think I have ever seen if your thinking about reading it quick summy of the story as stands is
After being abused his whole life Harry manages to slip a letter out just in time to save his life join him as he makes new and learns what it is to be loved and be a kid

Over all I am very sad to see that this story is abanded I would of probably read it all the way to the end of book 7 which would of probably been close to a million words if not more (this sorry is, barily passed Christmasmight see If you wrote anything else
storp930 chapter 33 . 11/2/2018
*spoiler*

You may of sent Vernon to jail but I'm staying to think it is for his own protection sadly
Derrick-Skalula chapter 3 . 9/7/2018
i'm sorry to say that the poor grammar is just throwing me off this story. not sure if the writing gets better in later chapters, but I dont feel up to slogging through the trash to get to the diamond.
Guest chapter 24 . 7/24/2018
I think you meant remembrall. Not remember all
Guest chapter 39 . 7/1/2018
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